I'm working on a more adult piece, I'm trying to push away from writing high school based stories and focus my writing on more higher up ones. My story I'm writing now is a investigation/murder type piece, dark and mysterious. I would like to ask my readers to help me with some characters so you feel more attached to the story since you guys can imagine these characters as they develop further into the story. I have a man and woman so far, The woman is dangerous and mysterious yet intriguing. The man is the investigator. Feel free to transform these characters or come up with one, maybe a person you know, or not. Tell where their importance would belong in the story, Ex: the woman's long lost sister or a man that works with the investigator. No anime please or fantasy type of characters. I have this planned out already.
Meh you can give a name 25 For her appearance I only ask that she has long red curls, always wears blood red lipstick and don't give her green eyes. Now this girl is a mess, she had a s*** childhood and her family might as well be the cast of Hollyoaks. This has kind of made her a big sl**. When is she ever not having a hangover of drinking? Never. She goes to bars every night and shes probably the female equivalent of Barney Stintson. She has a list, yes a list of past lovers. Shes pretty hot no doubt about it but her arrogance and big-headed ways are her worst features. She bursts with self confidence and makes out she needs no one but her past is damaged, since then no one has seen the real her.
Flora 23 Best friend/sidekick.. Long and slightly wavy blonde hair that reaches just above her rib cage. Ice cold blue eyes and flawless skin. Had quite a good childhood but as soon as she reached high school she met her 'Best Friend' and did whatever she did. Was always quite cunning and mysterious and sneaky.
Kyle Dean 26 Short, shaggy dirty blonde hair, piercing green eyes, a little bit of stubble, tall, muscular Kyle is the kinda guy you hang out with to have a good time. He can get you into any club, any bar, and can you out of almost any bad situation. He likes to drink, party, have fun, and hook up. Most people would say that Kyle had an awesome childhood, but it was really the opposite. Both his mom and dad both made very, very good money, and setup a trust fund for Kyle a few months before he was born. His parents were always fighting and yelling, heck, not a peaceful moment passed by in that house. When he was 15, his parents finally got a divorce. He and the woman have had many, many one nighters. The thing is, all of these one nighters have developed into feelings for the woman, which is very odd for him. He also helps the woman if she ever needs anything, which can be frequent at times, but is quite rare 90% of the time.