Catch You, Catch Me Rewrite

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -DDD_AccidentallyMe-, Jul 21, 2014.

  1. Hey guys! This is a rewrite of Sean, Kitty, and I collaboration story that we never finished~ ? Sean and I have decided to rewrite this again and hopefully we'll finish it this time~  Now the first Chapter is still being worked on so I'll just give you a summary for now so you can wait in anticipation for the story. I know I'm evil~ 

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    Violet Marie Johnson is not your typical nerd. Yes she's smart, sure she geeks out when a new update of Minecraft comes out, and okay maybe her sense of fashion could be worked on. But she's not someone who will just stand by and let you insult her or her friends. Oh hell no! She will say what's on her mind and she'll kick a little ass if need be. Violet's temper tends to get her in a lot of trouble, big trouble but she sure as hell isn't cowering down in fear after she—maybe—may have pissed off someone, who—possibly, just happens to be the most popular guy in school.

    Now he wants revenge.

    On her.

    In the midst of all the chaos two new enemies appear in the form of the school's bad boy—who is trying to soil the innocence of her best friend. And a mysterious girl that keeps bumping into her (without ever apologizing) and oh, did she mention that the girl is in the most popular girl in school?

    Just her luck.

    She's readying herself for the ticking bomb that is revenge, secrets, and love. She'll have to bring the fight to them.

    And she's not backing down.

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    Important Characters:

    Raven: The mysterious, cold, and distant school's Idol with a dark past.

    Ark: The mischievous yet oddly sweet jock with a secret that he will protect with his life.

    Aiko: The bad boy player with troubles at home.

    Violet: The nerd that have gotten herself into a mess that may prove to be impossible to fix.

    Mia: The best friend that have a few secrets of her own.

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    I hope you enjoy this taste of the story~ 
     
  2. I suck at Summaries~ ?
     
  3. Of my goodness! Wall me when you get this started!
     
  4. Chapter 1: New School, New Enemies


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    Violet stood still, her hands tighten around her backpack straps. She stared at the sign in the front of the school, written in big bold red letters—WELCOME FRESHMEN TO RICHARDSON HIGH SCHOOL. After what felt like hours, she heard a familiar bubbly voice calling her. She snapped out of her trance and searched around for the small brunette that the voice belonged to.


    "Violet!" The brunette tackled her into a hug and looked up at her with a smile.


    "Hey Mia." She replied with a weak smile.


    "Oh my god! It's our first day of high school! We're officially Freshmen! Aren't you excited?" Mia asked, her eyes wide with excitement.


    "Yeah, fun." She slowly inched away from Mia, her loud voice giving her a small headache. For such a small girl she sure had a loud voice.


    "Come on! Let's get to our class! Too bad we only have three classes together."


    Mia grabbed her right hand and dragged her inside the school, completely oblivious to the weird stares she was receiving from the other students. Violet scowled at them, making them turn away in fear. The feeling of dread from earlier was completely gone, replaced by her usual self.


    "Mia, I have to put my stuff in my locker! I'll see you after first period."


    She freed herself from Mia's death grip and waved goodbye before she walked to the opposite direction. After a few minutes of being lost, she finally found her locker.


    "Ah ha! Locker 201, prepare to meet your owner!" Violet pumped her fist in the air victoriously, proud of herself for finally finding the locker.


    "Nerd." A voice said as someone purposely bumped into her.


    She whipped her head around, her face filled with anger, she put her hands on her hip, getting ready to give the jerk a piece of her mind.


    "What the hell did you say to me?" The anger in her voice made the guy slowly back away.


    "Uh-uh nothing?" He replied with fear in his voice.


    "Yeah I thought so." Her anger slowly dissipated, she looked up at the clock and a panicked expression replaced her angry one. "Crap! I'm going to be late for class!"


    She ran around the halls and looked at her schedule and tried desperately to find her classroom. She abruptly stopped in her tracks and faced a classroom. She looked back at her schedule and then looked at the classroom again. She started to do the Snoopy Dance, excited that she wasn't late. Once finished with her dance, she entered the classroom and sat down in an empty chair. She took out a pencil and a notebook, ready to take notes once class begins.


    The bell rang and the teacher entered the classroom, setting down his things. He wrote his name on the chalk board and began introductions.


    "You can call me Mr. Thomas, if you plan on trying out for Football, Basketball, or the Soccer team this year, I'll also be known as Coach Thomas." The so–called Mr. Thomas said, his tone sharp.


    She looked around feeling a bit self-conscious being the only Freshmen in the class. Due to her excellent grades last year, she was able to take a few Sophomore classes. She was brought out at her daze state when she heard the door open. A boy with a plain black T-Shirt with black jeans and a leather jacket walked in, his mouth quirks up in an arrogant smirk. She rolled her eyes and put her head down on the desk.


    "Ah Mr. Maki nice of you to join us, take a seat." Mr. Thomas said as he gestures to the seats.


    "Uh excuse me, that's my seat." A deep voice stated after clearing his throat.


    Violet lifted her head and saw the guy that came in late. She raised an eyebrow at him then started to look around the seat and shook her head.


    "Nope don't see your name anywhere." She replied and gave him a fake smile before putting her head back down on the desk.


    "Really? Seriously that's my seat." He replied, his tone filled with irritation.


    "Should have gotten her earlier." She answered, not bothering to lift her head.

    "Bu—"


    "Aiko, take a seat." Mr. Thomas ordered.


    Violet lifted her head and gave Aiko another fake smile before she faced the front, her pencil poised in place, ready to take notes. After Aiko say down Mr. Thomas started the class and told them what they were going to do this year and the rules. Violet quickly notes, her pencil flying across the notebook, keeping up with him.


    The bell rang and all the students rushed out of the class. She packed her things and skipped to Mia's locker, hoping to talk to her before second period began. What she saw made her stopped dead on track. A boy with brunette hair with brown eyes wearing a Leatherman jacket was flirting with Mia. Violet silently fumed and stomped over to them, her hands curled up into fists. The moment she reached them, she pulled back her arm and punched him right in the nose.


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    Okay here's the first Chapter, hope you guys like it! 
     
  5. Good show! Jolly good show! *claps uncontrollably*
     
  6. Thank you!  -Bows-
     
  7. Damn how do I compete with that? :l
     
  8. Ooooh! I like it! Wall me when updated again!
     
  9. I feel like she has anger issues.
     
  10. Haha well I did say in the summary she has quite the temper~ 
     
  11. Yes, but, you know, punching a random stranger seems a little odd. Unless he's not a stranger.
     
  12. Haha she's protective~ 
     
  13. I gotta update tomorrow
     
  14. Ik im busy ? sowwwyyy