Captive

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Makensia, Dec 2, 2014.

  1. Introduction

    The day it happened was disguised as a average Friday, and Jessica and her best friend Betha were heading to do their normal Friday rituals, except it was prevented by a strange line of events.

    "Come on Jessi, You scared of a shortcut?" ,Betha teased. "It just doesn't look safe" ,answered Jessica. "Stop being such a goody-two shoes" , Betha hollered. "Fine, if you say nothing about this. My parents would kill me, And you know that" ,said Jessica. Then Betha ran ahead, dragging Jessica after her. Then the chain of events that got them carrying more than hold caught them like a housecat and a mouse. Betha tripped over a obviously thought out placement of a rock, ensuring they would fall. Before Jessica could get on to Betha, their mouths were clamped shut, and when they looked up, they saw a dark hooded character, the hood cloaking their face. The person motioned to someone the girls were clueless of her presence, and then she knocked their head against something, knocking them unconscious.

    If you have any ideas for the story or characters, please feel free to let me know, so I can use those ideas to enhance the story. Also if you have any feedback, feel free to share it.
     
  2. I love this wall me when u update :) xxxxx