~*::Broken Boundaries::*~

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  1. Okay yes this is pretty much the Same post as my old one xD but I decided this one is going to be more epic because I finally got an amazing editor and idea helper to help me update the story faster!
    Editor: Rosie 
    Anyways hope u enjoy these newly edited chapter/parts and a new one just for you toxic xD
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    Annalyn's Pov.

    "Annalyn! If you don't get up you're going to be late for school!" My mom yelled from downstairs.

    My name is Annalyn Rivera. I'm 16 years old. I have long black hair with bangs that sweep to the side, green eyes, and I tower at 5'6. Yes, I am short. It has always been just me and my mother, Jennifer. My dad left when I was about 5 years old for his supposedly 'hot' client, and I honestly haven't seen him since then, and I don't plan on it either.

    "I'm up mom, calm down." I get up off of my bed putting on some light-colored skinny jeans and a loose baby blue long-sleeved shirt that slightly goes off my shoulders, and I paired it with my favorite diamond butterfly necklace.

    "Do you want a ride to school today, sweetie?" My mom asked as I made my way to the kitchen grabbing a piece of toast off the plate that she placed on the counter.

    "Sure, thanks mom." Normally, she doesn't offer to take me to school on her days off from work so it was a little weird, but I didn't feel like walking so I guess I can't complain! As we drive into the school parking lot, I noticed my mom gripping the steering wheel a little too tight for my liking..

    "Hey mom, are you okay?" I ask her worried. I waited for her answer, but didn't get one. She was too busy looking at her surroundings with some kind of of death glare. I tried to see who she was staring at, but I didn't see anyone that she and I would both know, or at least I don't think so.

    "He's here." My mom finally said, answering me. Confused, I looked at her.

    "Mom, what do you mean? Who is here?" I ask, starting to panic.

    "Christopher."
     
  2. Part 2:

    "Christopher." My mom said before shutting up and urging me to quickly get out. "Have fun at school, hon! I'll pick you up after school. Love you, Annalyn." And with that, she left. She left me there standing with a confused look on my face. I shrugged it off and started heading into the building.

    "Hey sexy girl!" I turn around slowly only be tackled by my best friends Tianna White. Tianna is freaking gorgeous. She has long wavy with a few curls, dark chestnut-colored hair, ocean blue eyes, tall, and truly has a nice donkey butt if you know what I mean!

    "Haha, well hello there beautiful! Why do you seem so excited?" I laugh and smile at her. "Did something happen between you and your boy Kevin?" I wink at her as she slaps me on my arm. "Ouch! You little son of a gun!" I squeak at her. She laughs loudly, then her face suddenly turns serious. I look at her and give her the 'Whats going on?' look.

    "Have you seen the new guy?" Her serious face gone now smiling like a fool.

    "Well, I did just get into the school and got tackled by a monster of a best friend!" I rolled my eyes smiling. She ignored my comment and continued on.

    "He is so HOT." She pretends to fan herself with her hand while laughing hysterically. "If I didn't have Kevin, I'd totally do him." She winks at me. I grin at her, I know she wouldn't just DO any guy and that's a reason why she is my best friend. She isn't like those other girls.

    "You're such a dork Tianna, but now I kind of want to see this new guy." I say, giving her a dreamy look, but suddenly received another slap to my arm. "What the dell Tianna?!"

    "I'll have you know that a dork mean a whale giggly hoo-hoo! And I am NOT a whale giggly hoo-hoo." She states. I sigh and was thankfully saved by the bell. I walk into my first class, math. Math isn't the easiest subject for me, but I can manage to pass. I sit down in my seat, middle row, middle seat. As I take my textbook out of my bag, I look up to take in this beautiful creature standing in the front of the room. Is he the guy that Tianna was talking about? I start to daydream about him instantly, he is capital H.O.T.

    "Ms. Rivera... Ms. Rivera?!" I heard a ruler slam hard against the desk in front of me and I flew ten feet in the air!

    "WHAT THE FU-" I quickly shut my mouth. I glanced at the math teacher, Mrs. Jones. She clearly didn't look too happy with me.. What an old bag.

    "Clean the drool off your face and go in the hall. NOW. I'll deal with you later." Yep, she was pissed. I shuffled out with my head hung low and sat in the hall. Damn, this is SO the new guy's fault.
     
  3. Part 3:

    "Ms. Rivera, I am not impressed with you at all right now." Mrs. Jones says to me. 'Ms. Rivera, I am not impressed'. I silently mock her. "Your punishment is to show Damien around the school." I look at her with a 'Wtf' look. "Damien is the new kid in our class." She continued with a boring tone.

    "Okay, sure. Why not?" I said, trying to act annoyed and uninterested but inside I am super excited.

    Class pass by quickly, and before I knew it, it was lunch break. Finally! Time to have some alone time with this Damien guy. I fist pump in the air, yelling out, "Score!"

    "You do realize people are staring at you, right?" I look over to see Damien behind me, and then looked around and saw people giving me weird looks and walking away. I blushed. "That was really embarrassing. Sorry." I said.

    "Don't be sorry. It was actually kind of cute." He smiles at me, and I swear I was in Heaven.. Yeah, that was cheesy, but whatev's! "I'm Damien. Mrs. Jones told me that you are the one showing me around?" He asked. All I do is nod. Nod?! I'm so stupid.. "Where to first!?"

    We start to walk around school showing him all his classes on his timetable. Surprisingly, we have every class together other than English. Maybe this is fate?

    "So where did you move from, Damien?" I ask curious to want to know more about him.

    "I moved from Victoria." He replies.

    "Why did you come to Vancouver?" I continued.

    "Well, I used to live here, but moved back to Victoria, then my step-dad got a job here, so my mom and I moved here with him. So far, I like it here." He smiled his adorable smile. I couldn't help but smile back. "Are you trying to interview me?" I dropped my smile and laughed.

    "Me? Interview YOU? You're crazy! Just kidding, I was." I stuck my tongue out at him and smiled. Suddenly he moves closer to me. He grabs and holds my hand.

    "Wh-What are you doing?" I asked, my face burning. He doesn't answer and takes his other hand and reaches into his pocket.

    "I want you to..."
     
  4. Part 4:

    "I want you to... add your number into my phone." He sticks his tongue out at me while handing me his iPhone. I'm pretty sure he saw the look of disappointment on my face, but whatever, this is better than nothing. I take the phone from him and added myself, and also texted myself so I have his number too.

    "Here you go!" I hand him his phone back and he stares at it. "Is there something wrong?"

    "Yes, there is." He said.

    "What did I do?"

    "You didn't take a picture of yourself for the contact photo." I paused and laughed.

    "Yeah no, I hate taking pictures!" As soon as I said that, he took a quick photo and ran off. Where the heck would he have gone? I only showed him half of the school!

    Anyways, school ends and it's the weekend! I walk out of the school and run to the parking looking for my mom.

    "ANNALYN!" I heard my mom and got inside the car. "How was school? Anything new?" I swear, there is something wrong going on with my mother.

    "Well, there was a new guy at school, my age, and major cute! I showed him around the school and we exchanged num-" I got cut off.

    "That's good, honey. But what was his name?" She didn't even ask it like a question, more of a command.

    "His name is Damien.. Mom, are you okay? You've been acting pretty strange since this morning.."

    "I don't want you anywhere near that boy." I froze, processing what I'd just heard. Then it hit me. I repeated that sentence over and over. That's a load of bull!

    "Mom, you don't even know him!" I yelled at her.

    "And neither do you!" She was right. I don't know him. But that's not going to stop me. She doesn't know anything. What she doesn't know won't hurt her.. I don't see why she would assume he's a bad guy.
     
  5. Part 5:
    Damien's Point of View

    The first thing my dad said to me before I walk into the school was, "If you meet a girl named Annalyn, stay away from her." He wouldn't tell me why I wasn't allowed to be near her but I figured there's no way I would meet her today anyways. I was wrong. She was in practically all of my classes, and she, of all people was the one who showed me around half the school since I kind of ran away from her after taking a picture.

    She is so beautiful, I guess you could say love at first sight but honestly I'm not in love just yet. I'm still having thoughts on why my dad told me to stay away from her. Is she a bad girl? Not that, that is a bad thing since I kind of like my girls bad.. If you know what I mean. I laugh to myself quietly. I guess the only way to find out is to talk to my dad. This isn't going to be pretty...

    "Hey dad! Can I talk to you?" I ask walking into the living room where he is on his donkey watching a basketball game.

    "Uh huh, what up?" He asks, not paying any attention to me. So I turned the tv off. "SON, TURN THE TV BACK ON." I laughed.

    "It's half-time now, so it doesn't matter. I'll put it back on after I'm done talking with you." I said casually, and sat down at the table facing him.

    "What is it?" He paused, and right before I was about to speak, he continued, "If this is about the girl Annalyn, I don't want to hear it. You heard me this morning and I'm not going to repeat it." Why the dell won't he tell me? What's so wrong with her?

    "Dad, give me two minutes! Not even! Okay?! I met her today because shed pretty much in all my classes AND she showed me around the school! To be perfectly honest with you, she isn't a very bad per-" I was interrupted. Great.

    "She may not be a bad person.. But I don't like her mother." He says the last word with a glare and poison.. What happened? And why won't they tell me. Whatever it is, I'm not going to let it separate me and Annalyn from being friends or maybe even more.

    Unless maybe she..
     
  6. Part 6:
    Annalyn's Point of View

    Don't you just hate it when people know something that you don't and it happens to be about yourself and then they say, "It's none of your business." when clearly it is your business since it's about.. Well, yourself?! Yeah, that's exactly how I'm feeling right now. It's been two days since the conversation in the car with my mom. I've been pestering her every chance I get and she still won't tell me.

    "But mom!" I whined.

    "No buts. I hear you ask again, you're grounded. No phone, no computer, and no friends. For two weeks." She replies walking off to the kitchen. Ugh, I really hate her right now.

    Beep! Oh wonderful. I got a text. I sighed and look at my phone. It's from Damien! I start to feel all giddy and ran to my room before reading my text.

    'Hey Annalyn :)' I smiled and messaged him back.

    'Hey! What's up?' I replied. Not even after a minute I sent it, I got a reply back. Woah, a guy replying back this quickly? Rare.. and cute!

    'I've got a question to ask you. This might be awkward if you don't know what I'm talking about but..' How could he leave me hanging like that?!

    'What is it?' I text.

    'Well, the first day I got to the school my dad told me.. Actually, can we meet right now?' He sends.

    I sigh. 'Meet me at Starbucks, the one near the school. See you there!' I grabbed my sweater before running out the door.

    "Mom, I'm going to Starbucks. Be back later!"

    I've been sitting at Starbucks for at least ten minutes now. Where the dell is he?

    "Sorry I'm late!" Damien says trying to catch his breath. "I tried to get here as fast as I could. I don't live very close to the school." I immediately felt bad. I forgot I didn't know where he lived and I just assumed he lived by the school. Shiet.

    "I'm sorry! I thought you lived by here." I said, blushing. Totally embarrassed.

    "It's okay." He said, smiling while sitting down. "So, as I was trying to say, the first da-" He got interrupted by a girl who looked beyond ditchy and had a baby color her face with crayons. She noticed me giving her looks and gave me this 'What are you looking at?' look. I laughed and looked the opposite direction.

    "Hey, you're like, seriously hot." She said to Damien. I look at him and he is just staring at her.

    "Uhm, thanks." He gave her a small smile.

    "So um, like, I was like, wondering if you would like, want to go, like to a party with me, and like, my friends tomorrow?" I laughed, and truthfully, I don't think I've laughed that hard in ages! She says 'like' every second word! She stares at me, but I continue laughing.

    Then Damien starts to say, "Uhmm.. Y-"
     
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    Part 7:

    "Uhmm.. Y-Yeah, of course! On one condition." Damien said.

    "Like, omg yeah! Like of course! Like, what is it?!" The girl asked excitedly and moved in closer to hear his response.

    "Only if you let my girlfriend here come with me to the party." I look at him in complete shock, but he gives me a look telling me to play along. So I did, although I really do wish I was his girlfriend.. I look up at the girl and gave her a big grin.

    "Wait, Damien baby! You like, pretty much like, just got here and you already have, like a girlfriend?! That's like super crazy! Well I guess it's like, not super crazy since you're like, super hot! Ugh, like fine! You're girlfriend, like over there can like, go to the party." I couldn't help but laugh again. This chick is beyond annoying!

    "Thanks, umm.." Oh! So he didn't know who she was! Phew, and I thought they knew each other.

    "Brittany, and like, I can almost like, guarantee you that you like, will be single by like, the end of the party! See you like, there!" She said, prancing out of the shop. I glare at Damien with a look, and he mirrors me, we literally lol'd.

    "Excuse me, we received a couple of complaints from our customers about how you loud you two are and I'm kindly asking you both to leave and be loud elsewhere." An employer said. We nodded, said our apologies, and left.

    "The party is at eight, what time do you want me to pick you up..?" Damien asked as he walked me home.

    "Hmm, it doesn't matter." I said, not looking his way.

    "How does five sound? I was thinking of grabbing a bite to eat before we get there." I looked at him and smiled.

    "O-oh okay, that sounds great!" I answer as we approached my front door. "Thanks for walking me home, you didn't have to." I said nervously, playing with my fingers.

    "You're cute, Annalyn." Damien chuckles, leaning forward giving me a peck on the cheek. My eyes grew to the size of giant orbs. I can't imagine how I actually look right now! "I'll text you later, okay? Bye!" He said, waving goodbye as he left me standing at my door still shocked and looking like a complete idiot.

    He.. kissed my cheek, said I was his girlfriend to that crayon face chick, and is going to text me later.. I start grinning like a fool and took out my phone hoping to have received a text already, although there's no way he would text me because we were just together.

    'Text From Damien'. My phone read. He.. He texted me! I opened the message and read, 'Stop standing outside looking like a lovestruck idiot and go inside! LOL.' I looked around, laughing before going inside.
     
  8. Bumpy boo.  hahhaa
     
  9. Lmao at the last part.. Ive had friends do this to me before they know me too well update
     
  10. Hehe do u guy like it? :3 yay!! 
     
  11. I like love it can u like update soon cuz I like can't wait like seriously
     
  12. I was laughing.
     
  13. Hahaha  I'll like update like soon I like promise xD
     
  14. Let me guess... Damien's dad is annalyns ex-husband
     
  15. I meant annalyns Mom's ex