Chapter Two.Ashley had jut returned from talking to the guy "So what did he say" Marianne asked "Omg omg omg he asked me to go to the bar with him" Lucy replied "And what did you say"? Marianne asked " I said yes adur"Lucy said After five periods it was time to leave school so Lucy and Marianne met up to go home. "When are you guys going to the bar"? Marianne asked " Tonight"Lucy replied" "Ooh I hope you don't mind but can I come"?Marianne asked "Oh im sure he wouldn't mind a person he doesn't know to tag along on his practically first date with me" Lucy said sarcastically "Oh come on please" Marianne begged "Oh fine,but please don't embarrass me" Lucy begged "OK I'll stay out of your way come over my house and we will get dressed" Marianne said "Sure" Lucy replied After some time Lucy arrived at Marianne's door and Marianne opened it. "Hey" Marianne said "Hey" Lucy replied They got dressed and Lucy drives Marianne to the party After the got there Marianne got drunk and stumbled over to Ryan,Lucy's date. "How u doing hunk"Marianne slurred "Good how about you" Ryan replied not realizing Marianne was drunk. "I'm good ur cute come with me" Marianne said as she grabbed Ryan's hand and led him to the back room. Months after that night marianne started having stomach twitches and throwing up a lot. "I'm going to the doctor" Marianne told Lucy "Why" Lucy replied "My stomach feels something is kicking it and I have been throwing up a lot" Marianne said "OK we will go together" Lucy said After school they went to the doctors and when they were in the office the doctor came back with the news "Marianne Lester you are pregnant with a baby girl" The Doctor Said "What"! Marianne and Lucy screamed in unison "The only person I you know what with is oh no oh no Ryan" Marianne thought "I have to tell her" Marianne thought "Hey lucy " Marianne said nervously "What" Lucy said "Umm,the father of my baby is Ryan" Marianne said Find out Lucy's reaction and help me create a group by hiring me Follow me for inside details exclusives On what this story is based off of and sneak peeks Also follow me for secret spoiler alerts.
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