blind love

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *pikachu99 (01), Nov 25, 2011.

  1. Okay so this is my first story soo dont get mad if its not that good.!!:)

    I walked along the beach shore letting the waves reach my feet. If only i could see the sunlight again. i hardly remember anything from the accident, it wasn't that long ago though, maybe a few months. The smell of the salt water filled my body. Suddenly my seeing dog barked. Something was wrong. She never barks.. "KRISTA!!" my grandmother yelled for me. Her voice was soft,sweet and frightened.? "M'am.?" i called back. "Get inside now! Theres a storm coming." Storm? I thought how could there be a storm? I just felt the sunlight on my skin...



    Should i write more.?? :)
     
  2. Awesome! More!
     
  3. Every five posts ill write another part so 4 left:)
     
  4. Bump
     
  5. Thats more than five! Bump!!!!
     
  6. I owe yall two so here


    A storm? But i just felt the sunlight on my skin... *goes unconcious* "Krista.?" wait i recognized that voice.. "Michael.??" i said back in a soft whisper.. Michael the hottest guy in school, or so i remember. Last time i saw him *FLASH BACK* I was driving, him in the passenger seat me up front he was talking and i couldnt help but to stare at his smile, he leaned in for a kiss so i tried to kiss him back, i shouldnt of....
     
  7. CONTINUED FLASHBACK Just like that the second are lips touched, we wrecked.... Talk about sparks flying.... I got messed up eyes fractured elbow 3 broken toes and a neck brace, I have to use a seeing dog now and all he had was a broken leg and a scar in his right arm... I remember the last things i saw.. Him he was trying to guard me trying to protect but thats all i remember from the accident END FLASHBACK i remember my vision fading he came every day to bring me flowers and teddy bears every day got greyer until it was pitch black. "Krista, i didnt mean to run into you im sorry.!!" Michael stated. "Wait someone tell me what happened." "You see i was running and i tripped and landed on u, u hit ur head on the sidewalk, ur blood it was.... Every where." how long have i been out of it i mean i smell gross. Oh and theres one more IMPORTANT thing about Michael hes half Fairey. When someone hes around he freaks out and sometimes he grows his wings... Its really cool to watch but of course i cant see anymore. Ur probably thinking Half-Fairey is that even possible.? It is his mother was a Fairey she died when he was born, Thats what happens to all female Faireys after the mate with a human, But only fullbred Faireys. They also have this amazing scent of smell, sight, taste, and sometimes they can read your mind. Once the Faireys become Evolved into an Adult Fairey they can do much more each one gets at LEAST one gift and at MOST four., Michaels mother she was special her name was Gabriella, She had longg black Silky hair her eyes were a glowing green color ive seen her in pictures, she was beautiful.. She had 6 gifts her gifts consisted of
    •Heal anything or anyone
    •Psychism
    •Talked To Dead People
    •Could Tell Where People Were Buried
    •Make people suffer on the inside
    •Bring back the Dead..

    If only she was here she could heal my vision....
     
  8. Im going to write more anyways

    "Michael, How long have i been here?" i asked him in a scratchy tone. "For a couple days...." I could feel him get closer and kiss me on the forehead. He moved to my ear and whispered "I'm sorry Krista, if i could heal you i would i never ment to hurt you, I love you more then you know." he grabbed me and held me tight keeping me safe from all dangers for that moment, it felt as if we left our bodies that it was only us two in this world. Our bodies twined together, and for that brief moment i could see again. I saw his face and how much pain it caused him to see me hurt. The whites of his eyes were bright red from crying, tear lines stained his face. "What's wrong babe, why are you crying?" He asked as he held me tighter. Crying? I wasn't crying he was the one with tear lines. I felt my face it was soaked with tears. "I'm sorry I'm getting my tears all over you," i replied. "No its fine, just to know you're okay and breathing makesbme relieved." Is this what true love feels like? Can he heal me? "Babe, you're my everything, I'd cross all the oceans to see you walk on broken glass to be with you, and I'd die if it ment i could protect you forever. I've missed you babe. You are my everything i can't stand to see you hurt. I'd give you my eyes so you could see if i could." I grabbed his face and we kissed. Our kiss was the most romantic kiss in the lifetime of kisses. I saw him again this time longer then last i saw more of him, his whole upper half of his body, He had a black shirt on with the DC symbol on it, his eyes were a glowing blue, his lips full and pink, his nose perfect and his hair, oh his hair it was the most gorgous shade of black I've ever seen. "I have to go babe and you need to get checked out of here and back home," He told me. My Grandma raced in here. "Krista!! Oh thank the lord you're okay!!" She held me in her arms. "C'mon lets get out of here." She guided me out the door with Michael holding my waist.


    Should i write more?
    Escribin mas?
     
  9. Bump I like it. Ur lucky people actually read your story. No one reads my story but only 2 girls