Black Blood

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by MJForever, Mar 18, 2012.

  1. Why. Why is he so attractive? His tan skin and his well toned body...oh it just gives me chills when i think about him. His soft touch....his gentle voice...so sweet but yet enticing. Hes just...perfect. I see the way he looks at me. Its as if hes hungry for me. If i could have him i would...but hes totally out of my league. What would i look like? A single loser trying to find love? Nonsense! Thats not me. No of course not! But hes everything i wanted...everything i desire....my only wish...is to be with him. I wonder if he wants me too.
    He walks over "Hey," he says with a dashing smile. My heart skips a beat. "Hi," i say with a nervous laugh. Hes still smiling and im still embarrased by his beautiful topaz eyes. So....hynotizing. "I was wondering, would you like to go to a movie tomorrow night?" He waits for an answer.....What should i say?????

    I hope you guys like it  this is my first time writing. If theres anything i can do to make it better, please let me know. Should i continue? Or not?