betrayal

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *katy1221 (01), Oct 17, 2011.

  1. Tears streamed down my face as I watched the love of my life kiss another girl. Although he doesn't know I love him it still hurts every time I see him with another girl but this was different the girl he was with was my best friend she had betrayed me.
     
  2. Later that day I sat on my bed trying to figure out what I had done to my friend to make her steal the guy I was madly in love with. Suddenly my phone vibrated it was a text from max: hey Emma wanna hang out l8r a smile spread across my face of coarse I texted back come over at six he texted back I said. At 5:50 I hopped in the car and drove to max's house " how was your date with Katie" I asked as I walked in " that's what I wanted to talk about he said oh ok I said look Emma none of the girls I've ever dated have been right for me but I think I know who is right for me who Katie I asked no he laughed you.
     






  3. I knew it!!






    I'm physic!!
     
  4. Tears slowly ran down my cheeks as a huge smile spread across my face I've loved you for so Long I whispered his eyes twinkled his orange hair looked liked fire and his green eyes shone like emralds he touched my cheek and leaned in to kiss me his kiss was every thing I imagined it was perfect he pulled away then looked at me his look made me feel perfect I looked at my phone it was 9:00 oh crap I've got to go my parents will kill me if I'm late ok bye he said kissing me one last time
     
  5. I'm giving up on this story
     
  6. NO!!!! You cant I love this story...please continue!!!!!
     
  7. I'm dropping this Story it's not good enough
     
  8. Come on more
     
  9. I'll update later
     
  10. Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  11. Bump..bump..update :)
     
  12. I'll update after school 2 day
     
  13. The next morning I hurried to get dressed then drove to school. When I got there I saw Katie flirting with max. Ugh I thought she new I liked him but she still kissed him. "hey Emma" said max As he walked away from Katie. "hey" I said when he got closer to me he kissed me. I looked over at Katie and she looked ticked off. I smiled. "Emma" said max " yeah?" "wanna go to the movies tonight" " sounds good" I said. With that he kissed me " see you at 6:00"