This is The Battleship fixed. I fluffed up on the other one. ------------------------- She ran, counting her steps as they clonked against the ground. Her white clothing against her dark skin was exotic. Her black hair was in a pixie cut, and her deep,forest green eyes searched in front of her. She was looking. "A-Admiral!" she hollered, halting. She had perfected her looks for today's ceremony. "Deckhand Knowls." he said, coolly. The thin girl saluted, waiting for him to do the same. He responded. "I-It's time for the ceremony!" she chirped. "Perfect. Return to your position." he said, not turning from the green sea. "Yes sir!" she cried, running back to the ceremony. "About time your back," her brother said, tossing her a cloth, and she wiped the sweat off her forehead. He placed a special necklace on her. It smelled of the sea. She shuffled to her spot in the straight line of Navy soldiers. The admiral was up on a small stage that was easily clicked together, decorated in white and blue. She glanced around, looking at everyone oddly. She appeared to be one of the tallest. "I would like to welcome you to the Navy Honoring Ceremony," the Admiral said, smiling. "and it is a pleasure to say that these Navy soldiers are going to serve as proud men and women in the Navy for 2015."