"Sweetie its time" I heard my mom whisper to me, but i still couldn't move. I just stood there outside the Grand Door looking at it as if it would jump out and eat me. Taking a huge sigh, I looked over to my mom and whisper to her that I was ready. She immediate pressed down on her bluetooth and whispered in it. As soon as she did the doors began to open. Hearing my name being called from the chairman up on the podium, I started to walk forward my long sparkly black and white dress trailing behind me. I heard everyone gasp at the dress. I stopped in front of the podium as I was expected too. "Hello everyone I am daughter of Mr.Donald, as you all know he has recently passed away"I said my voice breaking slightly at the end. "He was a good man but we aren't hear to discuss that, we are here to discuss who will end up getting the Ballroom" I paused as a startled gasped and shouts came from the crowd. "Do u mean your not go to take over it" "Who will you give it too" "Hey are u single." Each questions was already giving me a headache so i put my hand in the air. Instantly everyone went quiet each looking with curious and surprised looks. "Sadly no I will not be taking over the Ballroom yet, I don't know if i ever will" I said standing a little taller."But we shall have a bidding on who will get it though" I said. After a while of bidding,and I mean a lot of it,we finally settled on a price 40,000,000,000. "Going once, Going twice, and so-" but before I could finish my sentence multiple gun shots went off. Some hitting the glass windows,one hitting the glass podium where i was causing me to fall down on the ground. I saw my security guards rushing toward me but before they could reach me a man appeared in front of me and grabbed me by my arm and pulled me up. Not knowing the guy I started throwing punches though I knew they wouldn't do anything being one of the daughter of one of the richest dad, i didn't have time to practice fighting people. The man suddenly grabbed my waist and throw me over his shoulder and took off running. I started beating on his back wishing my security was here as the dude ran somehow avoiding the bullets that were flying everywhere as if he knew where they were coming from. Soon after me threatening him and a lot of running we made it to a weird parking lot that I had never seen before. Instantly a scene from a movie came to me about a man taking a girl to a parking lot and that scene didn't make me feel better to the point where it had me yelling rape at the top of my lungs. My heart started beating and I could only imagine how far I could run in theses heels...not very far. Ok peps tell me what u think
Ok ill try to describe people more -------------------------------------------- "Would you stop yelling,I mean really your getting annoying" My kidnapper said. "I'm getting annoying,I mean really I'm getting annoying,you just kidnapped me from one of the most important events in my life, so how the heck am I annoying" I yelled. Suddenly he grabbed me by the waist again and placed me in front of him. Then he just looked at me. I noticed he had black hair just like me but he had blue eyes while I had brown. I also noticed that he was wearing a suit which would have bended in the crowd easily, and I must say he did look handsome in it, I mentally rolled my eyes at myself for looking at my kidnapper like that I mean he is my kidnapper after all. "Maybe we should start over" He said waking me out of my trance. "Ok" I agreed hesitantly. "My name is Hunter, I am here because my dad wants the Ballroom, if he gets it, this part of the city will all be his property" he said. I frowned at him confused, "if he wanted it why couldn't he have just brought" I asked. "Thats for me to know and you to never find out" he answered. This of course made me mad. "Well then fine get it from the person who buys it because I'm giving to someone who just kidnapped's me then doesn't give me a good reason" I said walking past him to the direction we came from. I heard him chuckle behind me as I looked around for the door. "You can't leave yet, our ride is coming" he said. I turned around just to see a black limousine pull up. My mouth dropped, this limousine was almost better then ours, almost though. "Well are you coming or do I need to come and get you. I thought about it for a sec., get in a car with a stranger or take my chances running in heels. So I did the only choice that sounded good but I was pretty sure it wasn't. I toke off running fast as I could. As soon as I did I heard footsteps behind me, but that didn't stop me because I could see the door, it was at least 10 feet away, but I saw it so I pushed myself to run faster. I was almost there until I felt arms circle around my waist pulling me to a stop. "No! No!" I cried out, I was almost there. He flung me over his shoulder and started walking back to the limousine, which by the way didn't look at inviting as it did a few min. ago. While we walked I took the chance to look at where we are, that and I looked at his butt sometimes, you can't blame me I mean it is right there in front of my face and it really is a cute butt. "Are you looking at my butt" He asked. I instantly started blushing which is weird I never blush, my dad said its a sign of weakness. "No" I said looking everywhere but his butt. He just laughed, "I guess all those years of buttox exercises finally paid off. I busted out laughing but quickly covered my mouth, remembering that my dad said laughing was also a weakness. "What's wrong" Hunter asked. I avoided the questions by asking him where we are going, he said I was annoying and so I just gave him the silent treatment. Finally we reached the limousine, it took a while for him to get me in there considered the fact that I still wasn't getting in a car with a stranger no matter how hot he is or how fancy the car is. So he just grabbed me bridal style and put me in there with me on his lap. I tried to get him to let me seat in the seat beside him but he said I might decide to jump out if he lets me so that ended that conversation. Not that I wouldn't jump out but since the driver was speeding I decided it was best to just stay inside the car. It was pretty awkward in here since none of us knew what to say, I mean come on what am I suppose to say to a guy who kidnapped me. So when the limousine came to a stop , I grabbed the handle so fast that Hunter didn't even have time to protest. As soon as I got out I got ready to take off running but the sight in front of me made me freeze. ------------------------------------------- AND CUT What did you guys think I was trying to make it a little funny srry if its to short. Love ya
Hey ever1 short chapter this time ---------------------------------------There sitting on 1 of the biggest houses I have ever seen sat Ronald the man who tried to get my dad to let him by the Ballroom for years. My dad wouldn't let him though he said there was something off about him. Ronald smiled when he noticed my expression. "Aww Faith, how are ya?" he said walking toward me. I instantly started walking away from, my eyes locked in his like a snake with a mouse except,I was the mouse and he's the deadly snake. He started walking closer, we were in the woods so if i was to scream, no one would hear me, and if I was to run I had a good chance of tripping over a stick especially in this dress and in these heels. "What do you want Ronald?" I said. "Well haven't you heard, I want that pretty little Ballroom of yours, I'm pretty sure after all the damage down after the guns, no one will want it and you'll have no chance but to give it to me but if that doesn't we could always just blackmail a couple of people into giving it to me" he explained. "What are you gonna blackmail people with"I asked as fear builded up inside me. "Thats where you come in at, come on Hunter take the girl inside, and make sure she's comfortable will ya" Ronald said, then turned around and went into the house. Thats when the tears started coming. Hunters POV: As I looked at my dad walking away, I couldn't but think how much I hate him. He has blackmailed so many people before that I sick of him, but what makes me so mad it that he has also blackmailed me. He told me that if I don't help him with blackmailing, He'll kick me out of the house and me being only 17 had to accept this. I turned
To look at the girl, she was crying now and my heart couldn't help but break at this, she looked beautiful with brown eyes and black hair. Taking a huge sigh, I turned toward her. "I'm so sorry this has to happen to some one like you and I wouldn't have done if my dad hadn't blackmailed me also, but trust me I'll try to do everything I can to keep you safe I promise..Faith." ----------------------------------------- Srry bout cutting off in the middle of the sentence, I accidentally hit send well let me know what u think love ya
I have 4 so far Faith-the main girl Hunter-the boy who kidnapped her Ronald-the man who blackmailed hunter into kidnapping Faith Faith Dad-the man who died and gave Faith the ballroom Dont worry im planning on adding more soon
(Okay. You can read mine if you want. It's got 4 main characters-but I'm going to make another character main Solin- she's the main one I started with and a flashback. Aaron- Solin's best friend Dean-Solin's I guess you could call him Solin's bf Miranda- she prefers to be called Mara, Solin's friend The last one I'm adding is Elena- and she's Aaron's gf at this point. But her POV doesn't come until much later.)
It's The lie nd Love doesn't last forever , this is the one I started with nd the second. One in the smash up is the lie
Might not be that good -------------------------------------- Faith POV: "......Faith" I looked up at his eyes, and became lost in them, but them I quickly remembered that he kidnapped me. So I whipped the tears away and put on a blank face. "You kidnapped me, I think u have done enough" then I started up the stairs of the house. "I didn't have a choice, my dad was gonna cut me off then I would have no house and no school." I stopped where I was and turned around. "My dad was gonna cut me off no money, no school, he could make it were I can't even get a job, if it wasn't for that I wouldn't have done it." He said. I looked at him I couldn't see anything but honesty in his eyes. "Your own dad blackmailed you" I asked. He shook his head yes. Instantly I went and hugged him, I don't know why I did it. Maybe It was the look of hurt and betrayal in his eyes or maybe it was because I just felt like I needed to hug him. He wrapped his arms around me, hugging me tighter. Hunter's Dad POV: I looked out the window, wondering if the girl tried to escape, but the sight in front of me made me drop my glass of very expensive wine. They were hugging, HUGGING I thought, anger rising up inside me, how dare he go against me, I knew he was too soft to handle a man's job, I thought bitterly. I narrowed my eyes and they want to play the game that way them I'll just have to find a way to turn them against each other, this made me smile. Maybe bringing my son in this after all was a good idea. Turning around I motioned the butler to come clean this up. Then I went upstairs to start planning the sooner the better. I thought selfishly. ------------------------------------------ I know its short but I have to go somewhere and ohh i wonder what he's planning cause I don't know anyway let me know what u think
This is really good I just have one little suggestion and that is to try and break up the paragraph a bit more. u know?? It'll be easier to read!!