Prologue: I looked around, making sure no one was there as I slowly creeped behind him. Gun in hand, finger on the trigger. I place the tip of the gun on the back of his head. I am about to pull. Then I see two children staring at me. I thought "damn it, I can't kill him in front of his own kids, what kind of a person would I be". He turned to look at me, I slowly put the gun back in the holster and I leave... Be easy my first fan fic
Sandstorm. Buff, blonde hair, fast, powerful, good with knives and guns. Looks friendly but is angry all the time.
Yea you just gotta ad more details. Seriously it might sound hella cheezy to you but it will probably be good. Use as much imagery as you can and ill take a part 5'5, long brown hair, hazel eyes, athletic build, white, tan, play golf, soccer, dirt bike, ski, etc.
Just needs more detail, suspense, action. You know. Stuff LOL. BTW can I be in? Name: Danny Description: Low-slung jeans or shorts, black baggy hoodies, headphones on or around neck, dark brown eyes that can be mistaken for black, gold chain necklace, crooked grin, messy kinda long black hair, tattoo of a dragon on my arm xD, backwards baseball cap (WOOO BOSTON), black DC sneakers Personality: Happy, out-going, serious and silent when needed, caring, compassionate, random when it's awkward, talkative, evil at times, doesn't have feelings for girls Qualities: Ninjalike, prankster, doctor skills, good at hacking and coding I. Am. Ninjaaaaaaaa.