As Requested By Negan

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Damn-iScrewedUp, Oct 21, 2018.

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  1. She acts like she's perfect,
    I peeped the demons under the surface...
    Can a woman be worth it,
    She filled my head with curses...
    I wear my emotions like a sweater,
    I'm falling apart, I gotta get it together...
    She's guilty not innocent,
    Abe is the only one in a cent...
    Thought she was a dime, my mistake,
    How does that last line correlate?
    She can have melons and cake,
    It doesn't mean she tastes great...
    Her body could be bangin',
    I'm not interested in a physical.
    Peep the knowledge I'm slangin',
    I'm more focused on her mental.
    Pointing fingers like a toddler,
    I told myself why bother...
    You can't trust somebody's daughter,
    If they grew up without a father...
    Girls can act like movie stars,
    Excited by nails, hairs, money and cars...
    So many should win Oscars,
    The way they play roles and leave scars...
    She wrote out a script in her head,
    Women always stay a step a head...
    She tried to corrupt me and sell a fantasy,
    I told I'd rather overdose on ecstasy...
    I imagined it might felt like ecstasy,
    Until she started to question me...
    She wants me to drown in her misery,
    She should drown in it by herself...
    I saw what's behind her eyes,
    The demons she has that she denies...
    I tried to let go of the rope,
    My hand was bleeding badly holding on...
    I've never been the type to grope,
    But she made me feel violated...
    She made me sit there and take it,
    I was so oblivious I felt naked...

    She's acting, she's acting,
    But innocent until proven guilty...
    I'm fa pping, I'm fa pping,
    Because the false guilt will kill me...
    I tripled up the security,
    I can't keep letting her near me...
    To play me, she's so eerily,
    She's a monster, so she doesn't fear me...
    I'm feeling so weary,
    So I fall back to nothingness and dive in...
    She's knows I know she's lyin...
    She said trust her, but I rather be dyin...
     
  2. Sin by Young Thug featuring Jaden Smith is the beat I wrote this to... in like 25ish minutes.
     
  3. a few people were wondering what beat to read the songs/raps to, so yeah. kinda. also, "as requested by negan" is literally the title? not sure which thing you're asking about, but that pretty much answers both things i think
     
  4. Nobody cares about what YOU ask for. No one is in unison with you nor your lame, hateful comments... You emo quitted, then you came back trying to irritate people for clout. You won't get any clout off of me, Alban... Do not spread your negativity to my threads.
     
  5. Thank you.
     
  6. oof used the government name
     
  7. No. I'm not upset. Chase clout on a different thread.
     
  8. When the hell did I ask for this flaming garbage can ?
     
  9. Usually I'd insult you, but you're a culture vulture so I'll let your opinion slide. Have some search up when you asked. It's all public.
     

  10. I think for someone to subject another into being something as a culture vulture doesn’t really make sense especially in your standards.

    You seem to enjoy writing lyrics and rhymes and it doesn’t matter that you don’t have a beat on here. Obviously you have an inspiration which in my opinion is quite pathetic. Regardless of my opinion you also take things from the culture of songwriting and lyrical creation. Which by any means isn’t easy. To subject someone to a standard of a Culture Vulture you’re making a panting of yourself being a higher mind when in reality you’re just as pathetic as everyone on PimD including myself which I don’t need anyone to tell me ? oooo lookie I insulted myself

    ? “uSuAlLy i’D iNsUlT yOu”

    I mean weather you do or don’t I honestly don’t give a damn.

     
  11. My standards aren't reachable. I've accepted that no one will ever meet my standards because of how fu cked up people are.

    Inspiration might be pathetic to you, but like I said... you're a culture vulture. I can't care or I wouldn't be me if I did.

    Oh... and I'm not pathetic like the rest of PIMD... I've stayed true to myself no matter what shade or hate has been thrown my way. I've been one of the most loyal people on this game since I found it by accident. You people... can't and won't ever be able to change me. I'll die being me
     
  12. Btw, thank you for hating. I need motivation anyways. Keep edging me on to do better, coach
     
  13. “yOu PeOpLe”

     you done here kid? Your antics are really putting me to sleep here.

    Sounds like Jr. here has an issue getting along with society. Lemme guess did someone tell you that you couldn’t be a big time rapper also ?

    Aren’t you someone’s Alt? How are you gonna preach about being original when all you do is post self made lyrics and claim to have this “uNabTaInAbLe sTaNdArD” when you got 17 year olds making twice as much as a doctor makes.

    Is that too much of a Culture Vulture thing for me to say sport?
    Hey I bet your mommy told you that you could be President when you grew up

    If you have this standard why waste your time here when you could Idunno do something more productive with it? Just a wild thought. You know those things things you have... oh wait sorry too much of a Culture Vulture for ya.

     
  14. Reflect more on the term "culture vulture". How does it differ from an inspired artist?

    Are you sure there are no cultures that you're vulturing off? Are we all culture vultures?
     
  15. Your society makes me sick. I don't want to fall victim to being like you. I'd rather change it, but to address your concerns about my financial wellbeing... I'm eating good over here. It's great to have high standards, but I see you rather me succumb to being spiteful like yourself... if I was a follower like you people... I'd rather die. And you can tell me I won't be anything, but I'm still going to enjoy life and get by just fine.
     
  16. Culture Vulture vs. Inspired Artist...
    Post Malone vs. J. Cole...
     

  17. Gave it your best shot
     
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