Aphrodite's Adventure Ch. 1

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Vice, Mar 20, 2018.

  1. Hi, here's the first chapter for you guys. ? Hopefully its better than the Preface/Prologue I did a few days ago. I hope you like it.






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    Aphrodite, along with Jopo, rushed out of the room, following Vash.

    "Where are we going? What is happening?" inquired Aphrodite. But Vash gave no reply as he ran.

    Jopo, having trouble keeping up with either of them, decided to use an alternative method of travel. He decided he would to keep up Vash and Aphrodite. After whispering a few words far too low to hear, a flock of birds flew towards jopo and landed atop his shoulders.

    "Eh?" Jopo was dumbfounded. "I could have sworn I said the right spell.." Not long after, little blue birds were flying all around Jopo as he stood amongst the swirling chaos.

    Not long after, the tiny birds grabbed a piece of Jopo's garments and started to lift.

    Vash and Aphrodite stood in wonder as birds grabbed and pulled. They held their breath as they waited for Jopo to lift off the ground.

    ...but nothing happened. They birds were simply too small for such a task as they tried to lift the old wizard.

    Disappointed and angry, Jopo shoo'ed the birds away. "Why do I even try?" he muttered.

    "Come on, Jopo! We're wasting time!" Vash called out. "We've gotta hurry!"

    "Alright, alright. Give me a moment" Jopo replied. And with a great amount of effort, shouted to the sky, "Mobilasis Agoori!"

    At first nothing happened. Then a faint hum could be heard as it grew louder and louder until a large beast jumped out of nowhere.

    The beast growled and turned to Jopo. "What is it that you need?" It snarled through bared fangs.

    Visibly terrified, Vash took a small step forward, "Jopo.. What is that thing?" He inquired cautiously.

    "Ah, he is a dear old friend I met on my travels. He is a very powerful.. shapeshifter of sorts. His name is Kefo."

    "Jopo! Why did you summon me?!" Kefo snarled impatiently.

    "I need a ride." Replied Jopo.

    A moment of silence passed between the old wizard and the beast. After musing over the matter, Kefo finally spoke up.

    "Fine. I shall assist you for now. Only because you helped me back in Harlingot. We are even after this."

    "That is fine, Kefo, but I fear that I may need your help once again in the future."

    And so, Jopo climbed atop Kefo's flank and onto his back. As soon as he settled, Kefo jumped into a run passing both Vash and Aphrodite.

    "Hey! Wait up!" was their cry as they quickly fell behind.

    "Where are we headed?" Asked Kefo, whilst running.

    "We're going to the kingdom of Fenlis, to see what the problem is. There may be trouble that not even I could help with." Worried Jopo.






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    Granted I kinda focused on Jopo more this time because because I was trying to fit in Kefo into the story ?

    I still have to place Phil somewhere but I have a good idea how and where.

    So anyways, if this interests you and you wanna be a part of this, dont be afraid to say so. ? also, a setting would be nice too.
     
  2. Is this FanFic?
     
  3. Eh. I guess. I dont necessarily need to really make these threads. I just do it to "spice" up forums. I dont know honestly
     
  4. Why are you writing a fanfic based on real people?
     
  5. Because its something that some people wanted? 
     
  6. Because he can
     
  7. I love this !!

    My edit: the spell with the birds

    It shouldnt if worked because Aphrodite tampered the spell, as doves are a symbol of love and are sacred to Aphrodite ️

    So it’s like a mini troll.

    Or I could of used my doves to carry me to catch up to Jopo.

    Ideas for the future ?
     
  8. Why do I have to be an old wizard though 
     
  9. I rather this than contentless threads of
    “join my club” “need an rs” “Ava trading”
     
  10. Ooo include me as a cameo one day ?
     
  11. Because wizards are old. Ie. Gandalf and Dumbledore ?
     
  12. This is like the prequel to Boku No Pica
     

  13. Harry Potter ?
     
  14. O. Thats something ive never heard of. It sounds very Japanese.
     
  15. Very influential ? also Lord of the Rings.
     
  16. I meant Harry Potter is a young wizard ?
     
  17. Okay but, if you read my last thread ? you'd get an idea of where it takes place
     
  18. How about a stronger wizard casts a spell on me and I turn like... 25yrs old ?
     
  19. That's true
     
  20. Wyatt omg I love this sm