Anteria

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Fashionista2, Jul 30, 2011.

  1. Chapter 1
    My name was Amira I was the soon to be queen of Anteria , my people were loyal and just and to most people we don't even exist. I look in the mirror while the Taylor fits me for my wedding dress. I crease my hand on the bottom dress as I look from the corner of my seeing my father slowly clapping at me. I sigh and slowly turn to him with a disappointed look.

    Father: ahhh, there is my beautiful annta. As he took his finger under my chin and look into my eyes
    Father: I know what ur gonna say but he would be good for u, I mean look at me and your mother

    Before I could say anything my father rushed out the door with my litter sister holding his hand. I kept starring at the mirror, tge Taylor snapped his fingers in my face taking the dress of me. I put on a long balck cloak and went to the balcony having my feet dangle in the air. I took a slow deep breath and jumps off sliding down to the ground walling toward the local market. I walked by all my favorite shops but seeing a local Anteria civilian man handing out flyer to a planet called earth. I was stumbled I walked up to him hiding my face taking the flyer and reading more about earth. I climbed up to my room not trying to be hassled by guards . I sat on my bed and and read the flyer over and over again grinning each time. I got up and backed some of my clothes and waited.
     
  2. So good or bad?
     
  3. Is it that crappy :(
     
  4. I like it Jenny. Awesome! Keep it going!
     
  5. Yay a review !!!!
     
  6. It's not crappy I <3 it
     
  7. I think this one and fright night kinda sucked cuz no one talks about it
     
  8. Aww thanks but I am not having to much success on my stories
     
  9. Owww.. Same. My Perfectionist story failed...
     
  10. Yea I have no muse :(
     
  11. I liked it and same here I my story bombed too ๎ƒ (this is not advertising!)
     
  12. I liked it๎€Ž and same here my story bombed too๎ƒ
     
  13. Dammit double post!!!!