Another Love Story

So I took a lot of tips from writers here on Fan Fiction and I created another story. I hope it seems realistic because that what I'm trying to aim for also. So I hope you critics like it. And please Comment on every update I give.

So here it goes.


Hi, my name is Karina and I'm in the eleventh grade. I'm the shy girl at school and I don't talk to anyone much. I always wish to be popular but I know it'll never happen. I'm pretty sure being popular is better than being a normal person. Well anyway I walk to my locker in school and I see him. Brennan. He was so cute but he'll never date me. He probably doesn't even notice me ever. Maybe I'm wrong because he just looked at me. Was it a disgusted look? I hope not. I walk to class and he is always so far away from me.

"So Brennan, want to hang out on Saturday?" A girl asks.

"Umm sorry no I have other plans." Brennan replies.

The girl leaves with a disgusted look. I didn't notice that I was staring at Brennan smiling. He looked at me , smiled and left to his seat again. I feel so embarrassed.

 

(Brennan's PoV)
I Walk to my locker at school and open it up. What a mess! I have to clean up more often. I better get going or I'll be late to class. Hey look it's Karina, she seems busy better just leave her alone. Great it's Ashley again.

"So Brennan, want to hang out on Saturday?" She asks me.

"Umm sorry no I have other plans." I say.

She leaves kind of angry I guess. Look it's Karina again ad she's staring at me smiling. How cute. I smile at her and leave. It's probably the first time he noticed me. I noticed her since the first day of school in the eleventh grade. What a cutie. I never have the guts to ask her out though.

 

Thanks Royale. 


And "he" is Brennan I said his name in the story.

 

Karina
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Oh hey look.It's Brennan again! Well he is my locker neighbor I see him everyday duh. I feel embarrassed to I guess I should talk to him and apologize for staring.

"Hey Brennan. I'm sorry for staring at You." I say.

"It's fine Karina, it was kind of cute of you." He says laughing.

Cute? He called me cute! Maybe it's a start! Well I should say something but what?

"Thanks you're cute too.... I mean you were cute when you were smiling." I say.

"It's ok Karina I think you're cute too. Why don't we hang out on Saturday night? Here's my number. Text me, and call me. See ya." He says and leaves.

I got his number! I'm so excited! I guess he loves to lie to Ashley! Does this count as a date on Saturday? Oh well I'm going to meet him on Saturday which is tomorrow! I Can't wait!

 

Brennan(PoV)
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Karina. Karina.Karina. What a cutie. All I could see is her staring at me.

"Hey Brennan. Sorry for staring at you." She says.

"It's fine Karina. It was kind of cute of you." I say laughing.

""Thanks you're cute too.... I mean you were cute when you were smiling."She says.

"It's ok Karina I think you're cute too. Why don't we hang out on Saturday night? Here's my number. Text me, and call me. See ya."I say and walk off.

I gave her my number! Yes! Score! Now I got a date. I finally had the guts. I guess this makes me a man right?

 

Thanks! Update probably tomorrow but since it's Easter, I'm going to church and spending the day with my family so maybe there might be an update!


Sorry for any typos in updates I always reread the updates but I guess I miss the tiniest one's.

 

Bump

 

It's a typo and I missed it . Calm down sorry. 