Here is my first story ever! I hope you enjoy!! •••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• It was 2:35a.m. I had woken up for the 5th time that night. Another restless night I thought. I looked over to the right side of the bed and noticed Jaden was sound asleep. I didnt want to bother him. So, I swung my feet off the bed side and walked out the room. "Ugh.. restless nights back to back are killing me.." I said as I walked into the bathroom I failed to notice Jaden had woken up and snuck up behind me wrapping his arms around my waist. I flinched at his touch. "What are you doing up?" He said as he hugged me tighter. "I had trouble sleeping" I said without hesitation. "You know Kelsy, You keep having sleepless nights... Is something the matter?" "No, I just been really busy with school and work I've been getting to bed late and i just haven't been able to sleep." I said. I didn't want Jaden to worry about me. He had enough to worry about. With his little sister Sophie moving in after geting pregnant. He brushed of my response and went back to bed. After i knew he was fast asleep again, I heard aloud bang come from Sophie's room. I rushed in to see what had happened. I couldn't believe my eyes.
Here's the update! •••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• Sophie was lying across from her baby's crib in a pool of blood. Without thought i rushed to Sophies side and cried for Jaden to come in. He rushed in seconds later. His face was flushed as he seen the pool of blood. He checked her pulse. He stared at her in horror. "She's...She's...dead!" He said hestirically. Tears running down his cheeks. I cried in agony for the loss of sophie. I looked at her again. Turning her body over seeing that her throat was slit all across her neck. I noticed the window was wide open. I knew Sophie alway kept it closed. Jaden rushed out the room and called 911. I had a feeling I knew who did this. As the Forensic Team and police arrived I began to think of the person who might have done it. Jordan Anderson. The father of Sophie's baby. He was really abusive to Sophie and threatened to kill her if she ever left him. A chill ran down my spine as I heard Jaden vomit a few feet away from me as they carried the body bag out of our 2 bedroom apartment. Jaden was sick to his stomach. It was sad. Jaden is such a sweet guy. But has endorsed so much pain. First his parents die in a car crash and then his only sister is murdered. I always wanna help him but he just pushes me away. It hurts to know i cant help the one I love.
Amazing I love it how you isolate the character to create internal conflict but remember description in the setting as well as the characters
HERE'S THE NEXT UPDATE!!! •••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• As everything seemed to calm down some and after the detective took down my statement. I turned back o Jaden. I looked into his Ocean blue eyes. I could see he was suffering. "I cant believe it. " He says stuttering "I know babe. It's shocking and it hurts. I promise we will find who did this to Sophie." I started to sob. I vowed to myself and to Jaden that we will find who killed Sophie and we will get revenge. A few minutes later we walked back inside. Jaden sat down on our couch still in his pajama pants and t-shirt. I played with his soft brown hair trying my best to comfort him. Jaden has never let me comfort him like this before. I was new at it. He then stared at me examining my pink pajama pants and shirt then touched the end of my French braid. He smiled. His deep dimples showing through his pain. "Thanks Kelsy. I dont know what I do if i didnt have you by my side helpings through tough times." He said as he whipes his tears and kisses my forehead. I watched as he walked into the kitchen and made coffee. I glanced at the time on the stove 6:59 a.m. it read. I felt exhausted and worn down. I then focused my vision into my hands as a clintched into fists. I whispered to myself "I will get you.... you will regret taking Sophie from us... Look out you bastärd Im coming for you."