A Weird tale

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Sexy_nerd-, Jun 21, 2013.

  1. Ok few things before I start, 1 I have dive stories and none went big, I wanted to try one last time to see if I could make it in the big leagues, and two, I would love if people pitched in and told me stiff I could improve on, so here it is A Weird tale

    Intro:It was a dark night in that little down of Greensburg Idaho, I sat with my back against my bed looking at my ceiling thinking off all the things that went down in the last couple of months, all the ups and down's the weird and embarrassing moments, and the most of all, The Kiss. I kept dreaming off it, every night it would enter my dreams and I would wake up terrified. I sit up in my bed and look at my pink covers and sighs in exhaustion.

    My name is Allison Ford, not Ford cars, and I go to school at Greensburg High, our sports team stink so you won't see us in any newspapers. But are academics teams brings 1st place trophy's I'm every subject. My best friends are Jasmine Jones J.J for short, and Ashley Henderson, we've been friends ever sense pre-school and barely are seen not with at least one of the other 2. I am CJ singer popular even though I hang with the nerds, I actually am I nerd to, though I hide it from everyone else cause I'm ashamed.... Though J.J and Ally make me feel happy none the less.

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    Please leave me comments, on plot, spelling, grammar and much more!
    And Greensburg Idaho is a fictional place all characters are made from my mind:
     
  2. 3 strikes I'm out...