A Sold Soul

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 4, 2011.

  1. sits alone, in his room. The moonlight from the sky, shining through the windows. He hears the howl in the night, haunting him. He sits there, in his bed, thinking of his woes. His pity drowning him. He ends up far from reality, his illusions taking over. The last drop of pureness is swallowed up, darkness taking over. He screams and cries, but nobody hears; they were just echos vibrating in his mind. His eyes, so full of life once, now dead and dull. His smile, once so bright, now means nothing. His heart, once full of love and compassion, now full of hatred and greed. His soul, clean and pure, now full of sins and rotten. His delusional mind, driving him sane. His dream, now a nightmare. trapped in his mind, a hell that won't stop. His lungs burn, like hellfire. The wolf howls, far away, pitying the young man. He was so young, yet darkness had taken over his body. The light, far from his grasp. His screams and begging were not considered. His last chance, slowly disappearing. The last of hope; was gone. He started to burn, the flames licking his blood. Until all was left was his soul. His soul, dark, black and tempting. The shadows consuming it slowly, tormenting him. He screams in pain, begging them to stop. The shadows just laugh, tormenting him more. Until, his soul is completely consumed, the shadows licking their lips. The last scream is heard. The scream which pierce the peaceful graves, causing the dead to wake. The ashes, carried off by wind, offered as a sacrifice. A sacrifice to the dead itself.

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    Please comment!
     
  2. OMGZ that is scarie
     
  3. Lmao thnx. Qin, I love ur story. Plz continue!
     
  4. This is about a young man who sold his soul to get what he wanted. Immortality. He betrayed God, (damn I hate saying that) and was punished. He begged for forgiveness and our Lord forgave him but he still went to hell. The last words he heard were you are forgiven. Then everything went black and the devil ate him.
     
  5. Very good 
     
  6. I really like this!
     
  7. Lmao (I hate saying that) me too
     
  8. Lol. Might wire a horror and romantic oneshot later
     
  9. Awesomecan't wait