A poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Cakie-Bear (01), Apr 20, 2012.

  1. I call this "Holocaust"- I wrote it when I was 11 

    I live in my own holocaust
    Far in the past
    My soul is dead
    I never wed
    I cry at night
    I sleep in fright
    I shout out in pain
    Blood showers on me like rain
    Am I sane?
    I don't feel tame
    I'm psychologically scarred
    Everything's charred
    Fire burns
    My stomach churns
    My life is ending
    Nothing is mending
    Am I alive?
    Or did I dive?
    Did I drown with an everlasting frown?
     
  2. Isn't my writing amazing? 
     
  3. You are a genius
     
  4. I thought so 
     
  5. This is crazy. It's weird to read this because you always mess around. This is an extremely well written poem. Great Job Cakie-Bear 