A Poem....I guess.

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by *BunanzaTheBunny (01), Sep 20, 2011.

  1. You left me in pieces
    My heart is in two

    For you are not mine
    Because he is with you

    You promised a future
    But I'm stuck in the past

    You said that you'd be there
    Do you remember that?

    My nights are now sleepless
    My days are now wasted

    Not living or dead
    In-between the spaces.

    The gun is already loaded
    There's no turning back

    You walk in the room
    My dead body on the floor.

    Just skin and flesh
    A body, nothing more.

    This letter says why
    I'd do this to you.

    Maybe if you'd find it
    You'd know I love you.
     
  2. Nooooooo it's just....
     
  3. It's not bad
     
  4. I  it! And I know poetry when I see it. (I'm a poet )
     
  5. ... .-. Wow
     
  6. No.. Its pretty good actually. 
     
  7. It's just....
     
  8. It's a good poem.. Its just Wow...
     
  9. d o ______ o b
    You can has hug now.
     
  10. Really!!??

    *FANGIRL SCREECH*
     
  11.  really good! But sad
     
  12. Yeah. It's just.... It's just so....
     
  13. Seb...are you okay?

    But other than that...you left me...speechless?
     
  14. Azarah choke on it or cough it up.

    Let's see the word vomit now.
     
  15. I'm okay, just putting my emotions into words.
     
  16. Emotions why how? Youre suicidal?
     
  17. I put "it's just so...." so many times because I can't come up with a word to describe. It. On one hand, it's absolutely terrible. But on the other hand...I would guess that it's true and heartfelt and that it's beautiful. I guess. Does that male any sense? Did I just use an oxymoron?
     
  18. It's a lovely poem