Umm, okie then, I want to write a new story that will be updated weekly, probably around 6pm every Saturday GMT, maybe more frequently if I feel like it. Anyway, the basic setting is in Italy, around the 17th century and the protagonist is a young merchant. This merchant discovers something special. There's a big bad guy, you get the picture. I just wanted to ask people's opinion of the plot, and before I write maybe some specific advice. I might also take some character applications too, I find it makes the story more interactive. So without any more of my stupid rambling, comment away!