As the principal called me over to his office I knew something wasn't right. " Mr.Mason you wanted to see me ? " Allison, yes please come sit I've heard some rumors going around about you " " What is it ? " I've heard you haven't been eating much.. Your quite skinny? " we'll yeah it's true I don't really like eating. " Any reason...why? " Uhh.. It's nothing.. Well I have to go my boyfriends in the car waiting. After I left the principals office I felt shame inside me their was a reason but why would I tell him? *As I walked outside of school their was my boyfriend Matthew we have been only dating for a month and he's been helping me a lot lately with my homework and problems at home. " Hey Umm Allison we have to talk. " What is it ? " I've heard some sad rumors about. You. " And..? " We'll Allison I just don't want you to think the only reason I'm going out with you is because your skinny. I mean your beautiful in any way, I heard you've been not eating lately just because you want to impress me? " Well yeah.. I didn't want to look ugly for you. " Allison, your very beautiful just the way you are don't rely on what other people say because they are just jealous I love you and I want to spend the rest of my life with you just don't force yourself to not eat nothing it's not right baby. " I'm sorry Matthew, please forgive me.. " of course i will always forgive you baby,I love you so much. *he kissed my lips* * 500 comments for a part two * And comment of what you think of the story so far...
Too many teen love stories... I vote no. That's my opinion though I guess. Work on detailing and grammar, and sentence structure.
I kinda agree with the first comment and I don't as well you need to write more to attract 500 comments but it's still unlikely that's gonna happen