This is my very first fan fiction that I posted here in the forum. I made Chapter 1 together with my two best friends by the help of our imaginations. *inserts Spongebob meme* Feel free to correct my grammar or any mistakes that I made. I know it's not good as the other fan fictions out there. I hope you'll enjoy the first chapter. Chapter One: First Day of School Merry laughters, stupid conversations, and sound of clattering chairs echoed in the room as they were enjoying their childhood. They seemingly care about nothing at all. A sudden loud bang of the door froze them, they were unable to speak nor move. Their teacher clearly saw what they did while she was away. Their teacher scolded them and they remained silent. A sudden change in mood surprised them as she remembered something, "Class, guess what?", Everyone hoped the teacher would give them free time, until someone blurted out, "Is it a new student, ma'am?" Everyone turned their eyes to him and then to the teacher. She showed a wide grin on her face and said, "Yup! A new student it is!", Smiles were plastered on their faces. All were excited, as the teacher calmed them down, she called me in and that's when I got into the scene. It was scary at first but their reactions made me feel confident. I felt like I was the most popular girl in class . No one muttered a word which was pretty awkward. The teacher broke the silence and introduced me to them. After introducing myself, I sat beside a girl whose name was Jane. She talked to me a lot even with classes going on. She's pretty friendly but annoying at the same time. All I could do is to nod on every sentences she spoke. Jane continued blabbering, so is the teacher. Recess came and I wasn't hungry. So I didn't move from my seat. I was thinking about horses, cars, and pancakes... My classmates suddenly popped up in front of me. Like all of them, and talked casually like they know me. This girl named Cana did a weird thing which amazed me. I liked her. I thought she was a cold person at first, but she's got a good hidden personality. A guy named Kevin with eyes that's so large, I swear it was larger than my eraser. All of us got along pretty well. I never thought that I would make friends during my first day of school. When all classes are dismissed, my father came to pick me up. When I arrived at home, everything was normal like always. I got three younger siblings who are girls and one older brother. They are so annoying, feeling cozy all the time while I have to do all the work. After eating dinner, I headed towards my room and thought that school wasn't so bad after all, not like last time. I tried to left that dark history behind me, a very bad experience that I wanted to forget. I hugged my pillow and whispered, "I'll look forward the next day." I closed my eyes wandering around in my dreams while I sleep. Thanks for reading. Any feedbacks about the story? I'll update later.
Here's an update! Chapter 2: How It Began "Julie! Stop sleeping in my class!", Teacher Darwin shouted as he slammed his hand on my table. Which, of course, woke me up. He looked at me with an angry face. I flashed an innocent smile as I hoped it would calm him down at least. But then I realized that it failed. I pouted, like every little child do when they fail. As teacher Darwin walked to the board and start discussing, I saw something on the board. A stickman beside it was a word 'love'. I thought, letting out a small laugh. "I wonder how it feels to love someone beside my parents." Being a very curious little girl, I tried it out. I listed all of the boys' names in my class on a sheet of paper. "J-U-L-I-E, J-U-L-I-E, I wonder who the lucky boy is!", Opening my eyes, it landed on him, "Ian, hmm... Not a bad choice." I give out a small grin. Starting that very moment, I started this false love not knowing the consequences of my actions which I will surely regret. I know it's short... I'll try to make it longer if I can... Thanks for those who are reading my story and for those lurker readers.
Any feedbacks? Suggestions? I really need it and it is greatly appreciated. I'll try and update later.
What grade are they in you didn't say I'm thinking kindergarten and up to second grade but I just wanna ask
She tried what out and why is her name spelled letter by letter twice?? That's the only two parts I don't really understand. Also in the first chapter you said "I got three... " I believe if I'm not mistaken it's "I have" or "I had" if I am mistaken, I apologize in advance. Other than that I really love your story.
@BurningHot_Cj: You will know about that in Chapter 3. I'll post it later, maybe on Friday or Saturday. I got really busy because of our exams. Please forgive me.
@mandie42: Remember, she listed all the boys' names on a sheet of paper. Then, she's like doing the 'innie, minnie, miny, mo~ catch the spider in the zoo~' thing. (I don't know if it's the correct spelling). But it's different, she tried it out with her name. I hope you understand that explanation. And about that "I tried it out...", she meant that she tried out how to fall in love. She's just a little girl, so yeah~ She tried it out by using a stupid method~ And thank you for correcting my grammar. I really need to study more about my grammar. Thank you for reading my story. I'm glad that you liked it.
Here's an update. I'm sorry for making you guys wait. Chapter 3: I Need Help, Big Bro! Days passed by, this seemingly fake love feels nothing like love at all. It didn't bother me or anything, as a stupid 4th grader who riskly love someone out of curiosity. While I scratched my head a few times, went a lots of thinking, I still can't figure something out. I really need help from someone who already experienced love. But from who? I look around the classroom and saw Cana sitting alone in her chair writing something. I stand up from my seat and walked towards her, "Umm, can I talk to you for a bit?", I waited for an answer. "Sure, what is it, Jul? It's unexpected of you to approach me!", she looked at me, her face full of excitement. I sighed and said, "Listen, I wanted to know how to fall in love with someone." "What? Are you serious?", she gave me a shocked and confused look. "I'm not an expert about these things, but I think you need to find that out by yourself. I'm sorry. Try asking your older brother, maybe he may be able to answer your question." I think she's right. I need to experience what true love really is. Even though I'm confused a lot. But asking my older brother? Are you kidding? "No, it's okay. Thanks..." I smiled at her and went back to my seat. Argh! Why am I working so hard to fall in love with someone anyway?! But, I really want to know... How that feels... I've read a lot from books, that if you feel in love with someone you'll feel warmth and a sweet feeling inside your heart. I wonder how that feels... Maybe I really need to ask my older brother! While time passed by, dismissal came. I hurriedly entered inside the house and went looking for my older brother. "Seph! Where are you?", my older brother's name is Joseph, but I call him Seph for short. "Yes, yes. I'm here. You don't need to shout, idiot." He reached out his hand and messed up my hair. I tried to fix my hair and said, "You don't need to do that, you meanie! Anyways, I need to ask you something." "And what would that be?", he stared at me. "I want to know how to fall in love with someone." I blurted out. "What?!", he shouted and looked very shock. I will continue the story in Chapter 4. I'm sorry if the update isn't really that interesting... You'll find out something about Julie's older brother in the next chapter. I'll try to update soon. Questions, suggestions, and criticisms are always welcome!
It's about a little girl who wanted to know what love feels like. You can also describe her as stupid or idiot...