4015

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by I-Love-Oreo-Pie, Jan 18, 2012.

  1. President: -JordanMooCow- (Jordan)
    Girl: Awesomemandy (Mandy)
    Boy: -J4K3Y- (Jake)
    Tyrannical overlord: BLC-Tynos-BLC (Tynos)
    Girl's best friend: Brother_Matt (Matthew)
    Boy's best friend: -Cookie-MoNsTeR- (Jim)
    Boy's dad: PWND_CROSSF1RE (John)
    Girl's mom: MorganLuvsU (Morgan)
    Girl's dad: Evil-Phoenix (Cornelius)

    As you all know, I've made a new story. Here it is:
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    Prologue

    Integrity. Something everyone should have. People nowadays don't care about all of this "honesty" and "trust." I'm one of few who do. The only others are my best friends, Jake, Matthew, and Jim.
    Jake. The perfect man. His deep green eyes make him irresistible to almost every girl at school. School is the only thing that hasn't changed in this time. Bummer.
    Matthew. My absolute best friend. We've been friends ever since we were little kids, when we were given up by our mothers.
    Jim. He's....a little crazy. There's not much else to say.
    Nothing is the same in the year 4015. They teach us in history that our country was once blooming with flowers and trees, without a speck of grey in sight. Our country was once beautiful. But it all changed on November 20, 3000.
    Earth had fallen out of orbit with the Sun. At least, that's what they tell us. Who knows if they're telling the truth?
    Now, onto Tynos, the "tyrannical overlord" of our once great nation. He has made us into pieces on his chess board. He makes the moves. No one has a right to do anything they want.
    One day. Just one day, things will change. And they will change for the better.
     
  2. Where's Mandy's POV? I thought there's more to this story? 