President: -JordanMooCow- (Jordan) Girl: Awesomemandy (Mandy) Boy: -J4K3Y- (Jake) Tyrannical overlord: BLC-Tynos-BLC (Tynos) Girl's best friend: Brother_Matt (Matthew) Boy's best friend: -Cookie-MoNsTeR- (Jim) Boy's dad: PWND_CROSSF1RE (John) Girl's mom: MorganLuvsU (Morgan) Girl's dad: Evil-Phoenix (Cornelius) As you all know, I've made a new story. Here it is: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Prologue Integrity. Something everyone should have. People nowadays don't care about all of this "honesty" and "trust." I'm one of few who do. The only others are my best friends, Jake, Matthew, and Jim. Jake. The perfect man. His deep green eyes make him irresistible to almost every girl at school. School is the only thing that hasn't changed in this time. Bummer. Matthew. My absolute best friend. We've been friends ever since we were little kids, when we were given up by our mothers. Jim. He's....a little crazy. There's not much else to say. Nothing is the same in the year 4015. They teach us in history that our country was once blooming with flowers and trees, without a speck of grey in sight. Our country was once beautiful. But it all changed on November 20, 3000. Earth had fallen out of orbit with the Sun. At least, that's what they tell us. Who knows if they're telling the truth? Now, onto Tynos, the "tyrannical overlord" of our once great nation. He has made us into pieces on his chess board. He makes the moves. No one has a right to do anything they want. One day. Just one day, things will change. And they will change for the better.
TYNOS. Really had that evil overlord ring to it. Well done, my friend. I can't wait to hear more. Your story certainly is an intriguing piece of work. Makes me hold onto the edge of my seat in suspense. What a cliffhanger everytime you stop for a short commercial break. We. Need. To. Read. More. Yours Truly, Oreo's Literature Zombie
Oreopie, you should elaborate more on the characters in your next update! We can't tell their personalities now. So I look forward to part two!!!
Part 1: Mandy's POV (It was Mandy's POV for the Prologue) "Today's the big day!" said my mother a little too gleefully. "Mom, it's not that big," I said. "But you might get picked to go meet Tynos! That's huge!" she cheered. This was true. I had been working up this plan for a while now, but my mom didn't know about it. I'm pretty smart, so I have tried every year to have the highest GPA. Whoever has the highest GPA each year gets to go to Tynos's mansion in the middle of the country and help him build what he calls a "time machine." No one has ever seen or heard of one before. If I can create the time machine, my plan is to go back in time and see what happened to our country. What REALLY happened. Get ready, Tynos. I'm coming after you.