3 (2 sequel)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Rhetorical, Sep 15, 2011.

  1. "Mom!" Zella yelled down the stairs, "Caleb's coming over, don't come in my room!" I heard a door slam. Most kids these days were raised with kindness and great maturity. Not Zella. During the hyena time, the people learned great lessons in life, but I never joined them. I continued to live as human, and had a daughter. Zella never learned important life lessons like the other kids. So now I have a snotty, greedy 13 year old on my hands.

    "Okay, sweetie," I replied from the kitchen. This was later followed by a loud scream from her room.

    "What?" I said as I ran to her room.

    "You IRRITATE me!" She yelled, pushing me out of her room.

    "Zella, sweetie, calm down," I urged.

    "NO! Now Caleb's gonna be here in twenty minutes and I haven't taken a shower yet!" Zella screamed back. Her face was red and tears were forming in her eyes.

    "Then take your shower," I replied calmly. It was like this every day.

    "GET OUT!" Zella screamed, she raised her arm to push me out of her door.

    Then I saw it, a small, faded 3 on her forearm.
     
  2.  I can't believe you made a sequel!!! This is really good I can't wait for more!!!!
     
  3. Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. I will wait not so patiently for an update
     
  5. MOREEEEEEEE!!! I'm going to die! *faints*
     
  6. Omigosh!! Continue!!! I need moarrr!!
     
  7. waiting...waiting...Ooh, a paintbrush!
     
  8. I did continue but it didn't post  and i dobt feel like typing it up again
     
  9. * waiting...waiting...Ooh, Gobstoppers! idk I'm just being random
     
  10. Plzzzzzzz continue!!!!
     
  11. Shall I continue to wait while mentioning random things. My hamburger hat looks like it feels left out!
     
  12. Chapter 2

    As soon as I was out of Zella's room, I ran to the phone. I dialed a number and eagerly waited for it to be picked up.

    "Hello?" The deep voice answered.

    "Dr. Hill? It's Ellysa," I said, trying to calm down. My fingers were shaking.

    "Oh hey Ellysa! How've you been?" Dr. Hill replied.

    "Dr, I need your help," I said. My forehead was beaded with sweat.

    "On what?" The Doctor's voice became more stern.

    "It's Zella," My words tripped out.

    "And...?" He replied.

    "She had a number, on her arm, a number three," I choked out. There was a long pause, then the phone line went dead.
     
  13.  Intense

    I love this story!
     
  14. What's it mean?!?!?!?!
     
  15. OMIGOSH!!! Intense!!!
     
  16. What's it mean?!?!?!?!
     
  17. Ugh, seriously? I meant,

    What's it mean?!?!?!?!
     
  18. Ahh! Writers block 