I left the house. Inside, a dead man lies. Yes, I killed him. I am number two most wanted, Karma Darnell. I walked down the street in my black clothes. In my pocket, there was a large butcher knife, in the other, a checklist. The checklist was of people that I planned to kill tonight. I walked to a woman's house and broke in through the bedroom window. Alarms went off. "Dang it..." I whispered to myself. I swiftly ran to the living room and sure enough, the woman was there.I took out my knife and stabbed her in the heart. Easy. Then I ran out of the house before the cops came. I sighed, my job bores me, I want to kill at random, I want to tear my victims heart out and make them choke on it, like I did my sister. I want to tear their limbs off, one by one, like I did my mother. But, my job forbids it, just kill the person and be done with it. Tomorrow, I'm planning on quitting. Then, I'm going to track down the #1 most wanted. /?
Chapter 2 The next day, I entered the door of a warehouse. "Good morning," the secretary said as I walked in the door. "I'd like to see the Boss," I said. "He's right in his office," she replied. I walked to his office, out of the whole SCI, the secret crimes incorporation, I was the only one who ever met him and knew what he was. "Come in, Karma," a small voice said when I knocked. I entered, inside, a small boy of fourteen with platinum hair sat on a large black chair behind a desk. "Good morning Boss," I said. "What has brought you here today?" he asked. "I'd like to resign," I said confidently. "But, Karma, if you resign, I'd have to kill you," he replied.
Awesome this is great i love it! You should try separating the quotations though. Seperate it into different paragraphs when someone new is talking . Makes it easier for the eye! But besides this is great keep writing!!
Yeah... That's the thing about writing and me, I hate separating it into paragraphs. I'll try though...
Well when people see one huge block of text they tend to skim lr even skip parts. However, when broken into paragraphs they will read every word. This is a proven fact
Chapter 3 I had my resignation mailed in. I was on the run and looking for a place to stay, somewhere close to #1. Before I left SCI, I checked where she had been spotted last. Shortly afterward, I packed my things up, which was mostly my large collection of weapons. Then, I drove to the exact town that #1 was in. After that, I enrolled in the local highschool. "I'm coming for you, cousin Sophie," I said with a smirk. This is probably the most pointless,shortest chapter ever and I didnt separate it into paragraphs, but I'm super tired, so yeah....