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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by F_FoR_FiRe, Sep 20, 2011.

  1. I got the inspiration for mine story in the club . Enjoy


    Ηι mine name is Gard , I was born during world war 1 and I haven't died since.Some times I wonder, when it will all end. Yesterday I went to sleep this morning a woke up and I'm 16 in a house I don't Even know, with a family that I don't know with friends that are a mystery how will I survive.

    I got up , brushed mine teeth took a shower and looked down. I left The house with out anyone knowing and went to school . Another day of living a life I couldn't comprehend . But today u felt like I could comprehend , I felt like something different was happening .

    During class I decide to leave, knowing all this information. After I left school grounds thats when it all started .
     
  2. it will get exciting
     
  3. i want more flame!!!
     
  4. Hehe you got it 
     
  5. I want more 
     
  6. I quickly ran to the dam on the other side of town. As I was running I noticed that the sky got close to the earth. At first I thought it was mine eyes , then I noticed the light I was running to I tried to stop I couldn't.

    Next thing I knew I was in the light , I thought to mine self "All these years of leaving I finally get to take a break"

    " wake up !!!"
    "Ꮤake up now!!!"

    I quickly opened mine eyes and there they were . Not on or two but them I didn't know what to do , I just lied there .


    Ik short update but it will get exctung and I prefer if u under 16 u don't read the parts that I say don't read
     
  7. this story left me hangin!!!come on finished it flame
     
  8. lol I will I'll do it short short loping long
     
  9. Spoiler Alert

    When ever he wakes up he find out that he lives in a world called vanguard now and the people that are there are nothing like him but he lives with these 3 girls 2 guys and an old lady whi train him for something .
     
  10. spoiler
     
  11. Feedback Please
     
  12. I finally decide to open mine eyes and when I did you wouldn't believe what I saw. There was a person in front of me. A girl with dark red hair in a pony tail ,one eyes was ocean blue and the other was dark red going with the color of her eyes.

    I quickly jumped up and moves away quickly no know what the girl was capable of .Ꭶhe looked at me like I was a crazy person or some thing then turned away and started walking . "Wait , who are you " I asked . "none of your business" she replied still walking .

    Then she suddenly disappeared , I didn't know what to do , I didn't know where I was or what's so ever . So I stared walking in the first direction that came to mind . I kept walking ad walking walking for the rest of the day .As hungry was I was I didn't know where to get some food and I didn't have any money , so u decided to try and steel some food. This was mime first time trying this so I had to make sure I didn't get noticed .

    I quickly entered a store going by the name Elän. As soon as I entered I knee I was going to be able to take anything from this store. I turned around ti exit the store and the door was gone .
     
  13. Ooo flame write more 
     
  14. Mhm very interesting
     
  15. Anyone here
     
  16. Flame I'm loving it man keep going
     
  17. Thx Ill keep going