Hi Everyone , I want to try to make a drama Story now. I'm new at this so please tell me if this is actually Drama. I have two Story choices Please pick the one you want to read about more or which one you like. If You don't like them both at all please give me nice helpful tips to make a better or improved story for Drama. Here they are. I Can Do It. A boy that is a Senior at the High School , is told he is too fat to do anything. He will never find a girlfriend and never get married . He won't ever have kids. One day he sees a flyer for a running Marathon for next year that says all contestants have a year of training. The boy enters the Marathon after being told that he can't do anything because he is overweight. Will he prove Everyone wrong? Bully A boy that enters High School and gets bullied. After the bully who bullied him graduated he became the new Bully. He faces problems at home everyday of his life and he takes his anger out on Freshmen. He is A Junior and he even bullies Seniors. He soon sees the pain he gives to the other kids and he can't live knowing he is hated because he created pain for others. Will he keep bullying or Just End it? Thanks For Reading, Have a Good Day! Or Night!
Why do you capitalize things that aren't supposed to be capitalized? What is the purpose? They aren't proper nouns, nor are they in the beginning of a sentence, please, do think of grammar, basic punctuation, descriptive details, and realistic plots while you're writing. Sorry to criticize. I like Bully. (Bully is capitalized because it is the title that you gave to the story.)
Dude, Are You For Real Right now? Does this Irritate you? We're only human. Not perfect. You're going to Have To deal With Normal human Mistakes. Thanks.
I'm sorry I'm a bit rash, it's just it bugs me to see a good writer committing simple mistakes that can be corrected by editing. That's all. Sorry to disrespect, Aziza2.