i'm not sure what the title should be  lolz 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Firbmthaawcmtmiw (01), Aug 15, 2011.

  1. His fingers pointed to the stars.
    "look, it's so pretty" he gasped in amazment as the stars shone down on us.
    "there just stars" i replied.
    Chris shot up.
    "yeah jade, by themselves they are. But look theres the big sipper" he carried staring up into the sky.
    "wait a minute, isn't it the big dipper ??" i asked.
    "yeah" he smirked " thats what i meant"
    "of course chris" i sarcasticly said, noding my head.
    His green eyes widened and he shot me a look which said 'i'm serious.' we could tell what eachover was thinking just by their facial expresion.
    "i'm going to miss you when you go" i sighed.
    "hey !" he pulled me in and held me so tight. I couldn't help it. I started to cry.
    "jade, i'll miss you too. But just because i'm not next to you doesn't mean i'm not here right ??"
    He gently wiped my tears with his thumbs.
    "now cheer up and smile"
    "yeah" i was to sad to argue so instead i just faked a smile.
    Chris stood up on the lushous green grass, took my hand and helped me to my feet.
    "what do you want to do ??" he asked , his eyes lit up. "it's my last day with you, and so far we just sat here moaning"
    "it's up to you" i smiled
    "come on jade" he tickled me "it's your choice, choose !"
    "i know. We need to write it all down, from the day i came here to now. I want to write everything down"
    "everything?" i could tell he was shocked.
    "Yeh, when your gone it will be the only thing i have left, and i don't ever want to forget you"
    He laughed. His warm arms wrapped around me and he whispered into my ear:
    "jade, you won't ever forget me. And i'll never forget you."


    Tell me if i should continue  i also need characters so feel free to leave details:
    Hair:
    Personality:
    Name:
    Clothes:
    And any other stuff which could be important 
    Thanks for ur time  love ya 
     
  2. Name: Halley
    Gender: Female
    Age: Doesn't matter
    Height: 5'1
    Part: You choose
    Appearance: Pale skin with freckles on her nose and cheeks. Straight caramel blonde hair with bright blue eyes. Thin and athletic. Always wears a necklace that her sister bought her.
    Personality: Protective of my friends/family. Trusting and gullible. Clumsy and hates arguments/fights. Always looks on the bright side of things.
    Clothes: Anything she feels comfortable in. Usually a bright colored tank-top with black or gray sweatpants.
    Talents: Dancing (Hip-Hop)
     
  3. I think you should continue:)
     
  4. I call a main girl
     
  5. Role: bff
    Name: Leliah cruZ
    Age: whatever but Shes a little young
    Looks: tan skin, freckles. Midback wavy brown hair with sone quirky hair. She has big brown eyes and she wears ribbons and flowers In her hair and nerdy glasses.
    Outfits: short bottoms or dresses with tights and ankle boots. She likes beachy clothes too and sanuks. She loves accessories. She always wears sweaters to cover up her cutting past. She wears anklets.
    Personality: she has a sunshiny personality and is very quirky. She loves acting and writing. Very understanding but is against sexist attitudes and meaness. Very athletic, is a gymnast and a ballet dancer
     
  6. Cam Rider
    5'2" any age
    Brown hair with natural highlights, tan
    Normally wears tanks, cargo shorts, and converse.
    Is a rock climber, so rough hands.
    Got into a climbing accident, so there is a long scar going down her right arm.
    Won't take anything from anyone, is willing to hurt someone if they tick her off too much.
    Courageous, Daring, and Sly.
     
  7. girl. Age 12-13-14-15-16
     
  8. Thanks ppl  i'll try and fit u in somewhere
     
  9. I took a pen from my pocket and unfolded a piece of blank paper.
    "woah, you planned this all out didn't you ??" he asked.
    I didn't answer. He thought i was joking but i was the most serious i had ever been in my life. To show that i was'nt messing i sat back down on the grass and pressed the ink on the paper. I began to write:
    17/3/2009
    The cold air breathed down my neck as i wrapped my blanket around me.
    "it's f...f..reezing" i stuttered into the silence. Nothing heard apart from the silence and me.
    My frozen toes took me towards the oak wardroabe. As i opened the doors i felt the smooth wood caress my fingers. I love this wardrobe to pieces. It's always been here for me. As stupid as it seems back then it was my best friend, my only friend. I rumaged around in the strewn clothing at the bottom of my wardroabe to find a blue animal hoodie.

    I know it's short but it's all i have time for.
     
  10. Np. I want more!
     
  11. The sunlight broke through the curtians as i opened them.
    "good morning world" i yawned.
    The stench of sizzling sausages led me down the stairs and into the kitchen.
    "good morning" everyone said one after the other, kind of like a echo.

    I know this one is even shorter  but i promise tomorow i'll write a longer one like the first  thanks 4 ur time and let me know if i should continue
     
  12. I'll be an extra.

    Amanda Addams.

    Age:15


    Animae dress and black leggings with Mary Jane shoes.
     
  13. Ok  i'll try fit ya in somewhere
     
  14. Hehe. I love the story.