Lies "Emily I Love You"Charlie Said "I Love You To"I Said At First It Was True But Than It Was An Lie Well To Start Off Am Star My Profile>Sweet,Popular,Drama Queen,And Cool I've Got An Awesome Bf Named Charlie(Or He Was) Now On With The Story I Woke Up And Stretched, I Was So Tired! I Got Up And Got Changed, Than Walked Out The Front Door I Was On My Way Walking To School, I Felt An Hand On My Shoulder .... "Boo!" There's My 2 BestFriends Sydney And Merrill Behind Me "Ekk Don't Scare Me" I Shriek But Am Cracking Up We Walk In The Front Door EveryBody Stares I Smile And Wave There I See Him,The Hottest Boy In School,Charlie I Giv Him And Hug "Hey SweetHeart"He Says Rudely "Hey Charlie? Whats Wrong?" Suddenly SomeBody Pushes Me I Turn Around Theres Rose Pretty But Mean,Friendless To Rose Says Sharply"Why Are U Hugging My Bf?? "What!!? i Scream, Haha,So My Grammer MIGHT Be Messed Up,Hope Its Not,Should I Continue?
I can't read it. Look. This is how a story should look. I walk silently through the woods. Following the short girl with the ribbons in her hair and blood dripping down her neck. Yes, I'm stalking a ghost. See how there's periods where they need to be. And commas. And most importantly CAPITALS only when needed? I'm not trying to be rude. I'm trying to help you out before the trolls get here
I Might And Might Not, I'll Wait For Some Others To Say What They Think. Oh,Btw My IPad Caps My Words Automatically.
Go to Settings>General>Keyboard and there are options to turn them off. Secondly, the capital letters are one of the many grammar mistakes. I'm sorry, but I barely understood what you were trying to say. Also, use periods instead of commas and entering. Don't be sorry Just fix it.
DIFFRENT STORY Is This Ok Grammar btw not same story different. I woke up and stretched. I smelled Hospital on me.I've been in the hospital For an few weeks now cause I've got lung cancer. I didn't know how it happened,It just Did One morning I woke up with an terrible pain inside me. Next thing I know I'm at the hospital Today I got great news from Dr.John I was getting out!I could finally gonna see my friends. 4 Days Later(At school) I walk through the front door of my school. Cry's of joy shout out "Emily" Running to give me hugs our my 2 best friends Merrill,Sydney,And my Bf Charlie Is That Ok Grammar?