the girl of horsley vale

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *izzy_wizzy (01), Jun 1, 2012.

  1. This is my first story so plz feel free to post criticism and other comments... I don't bite
     
  2. Once a young girl named cindy gallaway lived in the small village of horsley vale.
    The village was a quiet town where the locals often kept themselves to themselves...
    Cindy had a mother and father who often argued, cindy would stay up in her bedroom until the fighting stopped. She would cry and scream until it stopped.
    One day her parents had an awful argument so cindy swiftly ran upstairs to her room and listened...
    She heard the stern voice of her father screaming at her mother then a series of thumping and a finish of a loud BANG!!!!
    Cindy ran downstairs...
     
  3. She saw her father in a ball crying and her mother lying at the bottom of the stairs!
    She stood at the top of the stairs and froze... Her father turned around and saw her.
    He couldn't let her tell anyone so he locked her up in her room and beat her until the pain was too much and she passed out...
    ~~~~~I week later~~~~~
    Her father began too drink alot and then take it out on cindy .
    The poor girl was beaten and left lying in her room.
    Cindy awoke the next day to find herself licked in her room with dryer blood and scratches all over her body. Cindy heard her hungover father walk up the stairs, he opened the door and cryer on her bed.
    He was so sorry for what he had done to cindy, he fell asleep on her bed so cindy went to get a shower. She returned to find that her father was gone...
     
  4. good story but i think im gonna hav nightmares… :)
     
  5. Poor cindy waited in the house all day for her father... He returned at 2am drunk. He came up to her room and beat her. He then fell asleep on the couch. Again the next morning cindy awoke and her father explained how sorry he was...
    The same thing happened everyday until one day cindy got so badly beaten that she was rushed into hospital...
    Her father was left alone at home, he hung up a rope and hung himself.
    Cindy stayed at the hospital for 4months until the day her father was due to take her home...






    He never came.
     
  6. Thanks angel
    Ha ha ha maybe 
     
  7. Cindy was told her father committed suicide and that she was going into care... That night she arrived at the home.
    She was taken to her room then introduced to the children at the home.
    They looked at her wounds



    Not her
     
  8. Months later and a family from the village took her home...
    Things were great!
    She had a brother and a mother and father again!
    They took her places were she had never seen before. They took her to the shops and restaurants ...
    She was lucky until one say she was in the car with her new family and they had a car crash!
     
  9. Rest of the story ltr
     
  10. great job! keep up the good work 
     
  11. The rest of the story...
    After the crash, cindy found herself in a hospital bed. She was on life support and soon died.
    Her family survived and lived in there house again...
    They tried to forget but it didn't work,cindy would not let them...
     
  12. Oooh…
    Spoooooooky :)
     
  13. As the family started to forget the awful death of there arsonist daughter cindy, they would here the sound of a girl crying in the garage and someone crashing into the walls. In the night when the family slept,the youngest child named callum got up in the night...
     
  14. Callum walked down the stairs to see a tall man in the door way. The man grabbed Callum and tried to get out but someone had locked the door...
    The man dropped Callum as his hands froze, standing in the door way was a small girl, it was cindy. Callum ran up the stairs as cindy stood there!
    The man had terror on his face...
    Here is what happened

    .  -Callum
    /. \
    Cindy. The man
     
  15. Cindy killed the man as the terror was too much for him... Callum went to bed and cindy felt good, now that she had saved callums life she was at peace!
    Or so she thought...