I thought this at the top of my head, I hope you like it She stood there looking at the mirror, in some way she felt as if the girl looking at her was not her. Like a piece of her was missing. Her face looked the same but her emotions weren't. It had only been a few days after the Change, they said it wouldn't make much difference to who she was back then. But she could feel it. It was like darkness grabbing onto her day by day. It's grip was getting stronger and stronger. She, herself, was getting weaker and weaker. It couldn't be possible. She was Light. She knew it, even though parts of her were Dark she knew Light had already claimed her. It felt like her old self was tearing away. Her warm smile had changed. She felt herself give away comments she never thought she had ever had in her. Her past memories were slowly fading, new ones were starting to commence. Her life was changing so fast she could barely believe it. Claimed by the Light. Was it really true? Or was her whole life a lie, waiting to find her true destiny?
Remember to hit the 'Enter/Return' button twice to make a new paragraph. Once isn't exactly clear enough for some people. Other than that, it's fairly good. Bump.~
Good job Christie. is writing that fun? Im already thinking of trying out a writing class or something.
I like to write, because it lets me go with the flow with my emotions. Its really hard to tell, because most people wont read my work. ?