Comment on my poetry pleasePost your own aswell. I'd love to read it! The glimmer of steel, Shimmering in my hand, I never moved, Never jolted. My mind acted its own, And stabbed deep. The steel sank in, Soon drinking rubies. Memory and desire, Stirring up the past. Thinking to remember, But only bringing solitude. Thoughts are locked away, In a room of dark bitterness. The shadows haunt you, Haunting your every breath. Reaching out, Grasping only sorrow. The only sounds heard, are the voices, Which claim your sanity. If hearing the truth, Offers commemeration, Then the forgotten past must be spoken. As memories rain over your broken mind, You suddenly realize, You never wanted to remember the Sounds Of Insanity. Enveloping Sounds. Music Engraves. Time Passes. Sorrow Emerges. The Song Remains. Leave me, I like the darkness. It's a comfort.. Compared to the light of your eyes. Pass by. I need peace, Don't look at me.. I might loose my mind, In fear that he'll be back, Taunting me. His eyes, Looked in mine, And killed me slowly. His touch Lingers, I cower at any touch now.. Leave me.... I like solitude.. I love the darkness... Death lingers. Every shadow, Pertains death. Bells toll in eager wait, As death emerges. Souless entities, Haunting, Every breath of life. Vile Venom! Soothing deep within! Devouring living blod! Violent black hate! Dying winter tree, Melting like new fallen snow. Life succumbs to death. I figure that's all for now!!! Post onebor tell me what you think!!!