BURN

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *izzy_wizzy (01), Nov 17, 2012.

  1. Heya, another story, please enjoy and comment!!!

    20 years earlier...

    The Walls were plastered with orange and yellow flickers, like elegant dancers, the flames slid across the floor boards, eddy watched in utter disbelief as he watched his whole life disappear. His family became lost in the glow of colours as the flames engulfed them.

    Eddy watched his sister Sophia dart from the room as the flames travelled closer towards them, he also ran from the room, whispering is final good bye...

    He just saw Sophia spring out the window and run off into the distance, as he left the room. His mind was filled with images of horror and pain, he slithered his hands along the Walls of the foggy hall ways, desperately trying to escape his once loved family house. Eddy was lost amongst square rooms and narrow halls until he finally reached safety.

    The cool air slapped his burning face, his clammy lungs filled with black smoke...
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    Sophia had a tendency to escalate arguments but this had gone to far... She was ill and now a murderer! How could eddy ever forgive his Un holy sister?

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    Ok part 2 tomorrow! Sorry if it failed hehe have fun!