"OMG HE IS GORGEOUS" said Danielle. We where all sitting in the cafeteria at school. "OMG I no right" said another girl. "OMG is he like coming our way?!??!?" said airria! "why the hell would someone like that come to our table? Hes probably going to the door" said Danielle! Jason had short dirty blonde hair with bright green eyes and it was so obvious he worked out! Ella had long dark brown hair and dark brown eyes and was wearing black shorty shorts flip-flops and a White top Airria had short blonde hair blue eyes and she was wearing 3/4 jeans and a blue shirt and flat pumps Danielle had tied back light moose brown hair and blues eyes and she was wearing and sparkly top and shorts and sandals He was coming the girls way ! He slapped ella's bum! Then hugged her from behind "hey babe wanna go into the shopping mall and getta drink or something?" Jason asked Ella All the other girls where absolute gob-smacked!!! "Jason I can't I promised I would hang out with my mates. And I need to go talk to mr. Harris about my homework!" Ella said. "and I need to be in 16 to leave school grounds" "oh fine I'll catch up with you later then babe? Yer?" he asked "Mmm Hmm" Ella said Jason walked off out the door! All the girls where staring at Ella! "um what the fúck just happened" Danielle said? "nooooo-wayyyyyy" airria screamed at Ella "your dating Jason?" "how the hell did you find out airria?" ella gasped "not that I'm goin out with him or anything" "com'on Ella everyone knows" " ok so I am. No biggy" I said " what the freaking hell Ella he's the new boy who is 17!!!!!!!!! Two years older then us. He could go out with Sophie if he wanted to!" Danielle said "yer but he didn't did he" Ella pulled tongues at her best mates! A few people had saw Jason and ella and some had heard the conversation. As students walked out the door. People where staring at Ella. Sophie didn't date guys in school she only dates outa school guys. She was 17 and had long blonde hair and green eyes she was jeans and foo-fighters band tee she was a gymnast and showed off bout it doin splitz in front of her kewl friend. She had taken time off school because she had been on drugs and still smoked weed but she was Very pretty and a lot of boy liked her and thought she was cool! A few people thought that she like Jason! Sophie walked passed with her cool friend, Jason hanged round them as well. She glared at Ella " he's like so outta ur league Ella. He'll dump ya soon enough!" she spat. ...IN THE SUMMER HOLS... Ella was with kaylee her best mate from outta school. Ella and kaylee lived quite close to each other. "you look amazing kaylee!" ella said to kaylee. She was wearing a green dress with beads sown in it and black high-heels and pink lip-gloss. natural coloured foundation and black mascara and green eye shadow. "haha thanks Ella so do you. How did your mum let you buy that strapless pink dress?" said kaylee "oh well she didn't. I went out with some mates in school and got it. Isnt it gorgeous?" "yer it totally is" kaylee said "so our first summer party of this holiday. You got your bikini?" "yer totally. W-hooooo And Wat about u?" Ella asked "yer of course" said kaylee. The party was at matts House. It was a big house right on the edge to a big lake. His parents where out on a business call in Tokyo! So matt Was left at home alone but he was 16 so his parents THOUGHT they could trust him. Matt Throw loads of partys when his parents where away. The girls didnt actually know him But he was good friends with Tyler who was kaylee's guy mate from Her school. So kaylee was told to bring a mate so Ella came. "ughhhh kaylee how much longer is this to walk???" Ella moaned "um I'm not sure but we should get there soon, miss lazy short dress" kaylee teased . "oh. Hahaha very funny NOT my dress isn't actually tht short" Ella shouted "not even that short oh haha it only just covers your bum Ella" kaylee said "so I heard you broke up with Kai?" kaylee said "yer I no he was sooooo hot but it's summer now" A few girls dumped there boyfriends after the last day of school so they could then have summer flings with other guys.!.!.!.!.!. "me to. I broke up with Sam" kaylee said! "w-hooooooooooooooooooooooooo where both single ladies tonight at a party!!!!!!!!" Ella said "my White heels are gonna ruin if we have to walk any longer" ella moaned AGAIN suddenly the girls heard loud rap music. "PROFESSOR GREEN" Ella shouted "BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP. BEEP BEEP" a red new BMW beeped (lol) "Hey ladies wanna lift or are you gonna carry on walking for another 4 miles!!!" said one guy. "oh this is Tyler my guy mate" kaylee said "and this is...um I don't actually know your name sorry I don't think weve meet!" she said ina girly flirty voice. "oh hey I'm Jason. Iv just moved here to California from England. My mom got a job at the bank so I moved!" Jason said "so what are your names" Jason kept on looking at Ella as he talked!!! "oh hi Jason I'm kaylee hehheehehee" kaylee said "kewl. So whats your name then" "oh I'm Ella" Ella said "a gorgeous name to go with a gorgeous girl!" Jason said Ella blushed and jumped in the back seats with kaylee. "tonights gonna be sick ya guys" Tyler said "YER TOTALLY W-HOOOOOOO!!!" Ella screamed. When they arrived at the party, they heard the loud music and could already smell the alcohol. Kaylee saw Ale already in the lake flirting with some guys. "typical Ale" kaylee thought. A few guys where already stroking her long wavy brown hair and looking into her brown eyes but she was just teasing them. She wouldnt go on to do anything serious with them later on! Suddenly kaylee turned round to see A girl snogging Tyler "hey sadie babe I'm so happy you came this is gonna be awesome!" This sadie had light blonde hair and brown highlights and brown eyes. She was wearing a long colourful dress and flip-flops. When the couple had finely stopped kissing Sadie turned round and said "hey I'm sadie Tyler's smexy gal" "oh hi sadie I'm kaylee" she said. Kaylee walked off into the crowd in search of the fit Jason but she saw jason walk up to her best friend Ella "Hey Ella" Jason said "Hey" Ella said back. "you wanna drink? I heard there's vodka!!" "yer totally" she said "I havnt had vodka in a while because it's hard to get hold of it since I'm only 15 "wow your only 15 I thought you where my age!!" "haha no. How old are you then?" Ella asked "oh I'm 17" Jason said "awesome" "so here you go" Jason said passing the vodka to her. After a few vodkas Ella was feeling a bit tipsy. But still was aware Wat was goin on. Everyone was now striped......................... into there swim wear. Ella look at Jason in trunks. "god he is sooooo fit" Ella thought looking at his muscular body. Jason saw Ella in a skimpy floral bikini and he was gob-smack at how beautiful she was and was only 15 but stuff that he was in America now. "hey baby wanna go swimming then?" he said "yer sure sounds like fun" she said " Eeeek he called me baby like OMG hehehehehe" Ella thought "your English accent is like totally hooooot" "your body is like totally hoooooot!!!!!" Jason said back laughing. Ella blushed Tyler picked up sadie who also had on her bikini and ran in to the lake with her They where both laughing and screaming. Sadie held on to tylers neck and they passionately kissed and slowly swam out in to deeper waters away from everyone else so no-one could see them both "I think your so hot baby and I love the way you kiss me" sadie said "I think you hot aswell babe...just let me um one sec..." Tyler untied sadies bikini top!! and sadie carried on kissing him ........................................................ 20minutes later they came back to everyone else who was throwing around some beach ball in the water! "Hey you guys where have you been your missing out all the fun." kaylee called. "oh haha um we've just been well let's say 'swimming with the fish'" sadie said. They both laughed. Kaylee suddenly got hit by a beach ball on the head. Tyler laughed and a tanned muscular tall lad came up to her "oh god I'm sorry there. Are you alright love?"he said "oh yer I'm fine" kaylee said back staring at his chest "um hi I'm matt" he said "oh so this is your place then" kaylee said looking in to his eyes. They where a piercing Hazel and he had scruffy long brown coloured hair. He must of been about 5'6 feet And kaylee kept thinking "don't stare at his chest don't stare at his arms don't stare at him just look normal hehheehehee" "yer this is my place!" matt said back Matt thought that this girl was very pretty so asked "whats your name?" "Oh my names kaylee" she said "I'll be right back said matt" "mhmmm ok" said kaylee Kaylee watched as matt walked out of the water the water getting shallower as he walked and revelling more of him self until he was completely out of the water and just in baggy trunks! Kaylee was just staring!!! Jason and Ella where in the lake playing with the beach balls throwing them back and forth to each other, talking "so your still in school then?" Ella asked "yer I'm in in 6th grade" Jason replied "so where you go?" "I'm starting at California high in september !" Jason said "noooo wayyyy. I go there!!!" Ella said "awesome so we'd see each other all the time" "haha sounds like fun" Ella flirted Ella threw the ball a little to hard downwards so water splashed Jason right in the face! Ella giggled "oh so you find the funny getting me all wet" Jason said jokingly "well you were gonna get wet any way later" Ella said Jason just stared at Ella and Ella stared back Jason broke the silence by splashing Ella and Ella caught on and splashed back Ella jump on Jason and made him lay down In the water laughing Splashing his face! Jason turned her around and picked her up and put her on Jason's shoulders The music was turned up louder and was playing Dead mouse - a awesome beat that everyone was dancing to Jason jumped up and down in the water Ella giggling and waving her hands in the air to the beat. Suddenly the music was cut off and a matt was talking on a microphone "hey PARTY PEOPLE. Hope your all having a great time w-hooo. Ok so where gonna make this party a bit more fun where gonna play spin the bottle party style. You don't have to join in but if you want you can. Just form a big circle and I'll get a empty vodka bottle. Jason saw his perfect chance to kiss Ella "hey Ella you wanna play it'll be fun yer?" "yer shore let's go play" "you gonna get changed out of your bikini lol" Ella was untying the back of her bikini in front of everyone "oh god I think you've had a bit to much vodka!!" Jason said And before ella took off her bikini Jason quickly re-tied it. "you wanna play spin the bottle Tyler?" sadie asked. "I think we've gone a bit passed spin the bottle sadie" Tyler relied "howa bouts we go up stairs In The house?" "oh sound like fun let's go!" sadie winked at him. Sadie followed Tyler up stairs and into what seemed a office They started kissing and found there selfs on to the desk!!! And let's just say sadies bikini top fell off and tylers trunks fell off. "Hey matt so are you playing spin the bottle???" kaylee asked "um if your playing but I have a feeling that we won't be kissing each other!" matt replied "so do you want to play then?" asked kaylee "um I don't think I do" matt said "hehehheh so where we gonna go then?" kaylee said "well love we could go to my room and make out ? But that's only if your interested?" matt said "yer totally !!!" she said There must of been 20 people sitting in a circle all just wanting some fun! Ale was there as well and quite a few lads where staring at her!!! Lads where also staring at Ella at well cause she was in a hot bikini and looked a bit drunk so a lot of lads thought they could easily get layed!!! Ale spun the bottle first and it landed on a small thin lad who had sticky out ears anda hi voice! "hey baby come give me a few smoochies yer?" he said "oh godddd why himmm" She gave him a quick snog. I'll go next said a familiar voice Ella looked round and saw... Sophie "oh no" Ella said under her breath "um who Sophie?" Jason said "Sophie bad ass. Anything she wants she gets " ella said Sophie span the bottle and it landed on the lad next to Jason. "it landed on you" Sophie said pointing at Jason!!! "um no it landed on my" said the guy next to Jason "so come here. Is it Jason?" Sophie said "um yer it is and it landed on him" Jason said "eew scared are we. You never no if you like this you can take it further mmmmm" Sophie said flirting They kissed "omg is that tongues?" ale said "wit whoooooooo" called some people Jason pulled away and looks into her eyes After a few other people had span He then span the bottle and it landed on a girls opposite but Jason didn't Even look at her Jason picked up Ella and kissed her Passionate and full of love.
*spun. Hot_em/Souse_babe, your story is magical and amazing but do you mind correcting the spelling a little? And maybe a tinsie TINSIE bit of puncuation. I nuv this really! It's a step below perfection but it can be better than perfrction!!!!
I can't help with all the punctuation Come on I'm Liverpudlian . I can't help it I rite it as in how I would say it
Hey! This is a reallyyyyy good story. And I love my character btw But I do have a little question. Is this like a flashback of the summer before the first chapter? Because in that, Ella was already dating Jason. I'm just curious. Thank you. And awesome story!
After they stopped kissing they sat back down and watched as others kissed. The whole time sophie was staring at Ella in jealousy "he must be my age and she's just a little girl grrrr why is he with her. I want him and I always get my way" sophie thought. Ella had had a few more alcoholic drinks and wasn't a where what was happening now her head felt magical and amazing and her body felt like moving to the beat She stood up "hey ella ain't you gonna stay here with me?" "I wanna dance" ella screamed Ella was still In her bikini lol and had found her way inside the house She was dancing with gals and lads dancing with her she could feel the music running through her body. Jason came though finding her dancing on the table with a drink in her hand. "ella what are you doing. Come down from there now please" Jason asked "no I'm having fun here Jason" Ella whispered in a loud voice "Ella for goodness sake your 15" he said "EVERYDAY I'M SHUFFLING " Ella said "hahahahaahhaha" Ella jumped down on to the crowd and started crowd surfing "whoop whoop. Whoop whoop" Ella was giggling Jason yanked her down "no get ofer me Jason baby" she said "Ella where did you put your clothes" he said "uuuuuuurrrrrrrggggggggg" was the only reply he got Jason carried her to the car "now wait here" Jason said to Ella and put her in the car Jason ran up stairs and opened the door and saw A bare ladies leg under a desk he called out tyler's name Tyler appeared from under the desk with just loaf of bread covering "man wat the fück. Bread???" "I'm taking Ella home. She's really outta it. Are you coming?" Jason asked "um nah I think we'll getta taxi in the morning" Tyler replied Jason walked out the room and shut the door. As he walked passed the front door ... "hey Jason" He turned around to see Sophie standing next to him!!! "so I was wondering if you wanna come over to mine?" Sophie said "look sophie I gotta take Ella home sorry" Jason said "well cya round after you gotta rid of the baby" Jason got back to the car to find Ella not there He heard a scream and turned around A guy was trying to get Ella In a shed with him. He was also trying to take off her bikini. !!! "oi mate get the fūck off her" Jason ran up to him and tucked his thumb underneath his four fingers and with force coming from his huge muscled hit him rite in the nose. The guy fell to the ground nearly ripping off ella's bikini. Jason tied it back up for Ella once again and kicked the guy in the stomach. And picked Ella up in a firmans lift and took her back to the car. Jason opened the passengers seat door and sat her in It. Jason looked at the time and saw it was 5am. Jason wrapped his jacket around the tired Ella and shut the door he then opened his side and put the keys in to start the engine. "so Ella where do you live?" Jason asked when he saw ella awake "I'm not telling you. Mr scary scare-crow. If my parents find out where Iv been they'll kill me!!!" "elllllllla why do you have to make this so difficult for me Ella fell back to-sleep Half way through the journey Ella woke up again. "I think you are so sexy" Ella said giggling Ella jumped on Jason and started kissing him "mmmm Mmm mmmmm Mmm m mmmm m m" "Ella not now please I can't see" and Jason suddenly had to swerved onto the side of the road "look Ella you really wasted and you don't no what your doing" Jason said Ella took the keys from the car! "Ella give them back now" Jason said "there the only way where gonna get home" "so its the on on only way-y-y-y to gettt yasssss home?" Ella sputtered "yes that's right" "so you do annnnythingggg for them?" Ella asked "um yes" Jason said Ella dropped them down her bikini top !!!!!!!!!!! "want 'em come get 'em" Ella said and jumped in the back Jason jumped in after her And Jason did get his key back but didn't drive home!!!! "dam what time is it" sadie thought "7am" she read from tyler's watch "hold on back up. From tyler's watch" sadie looked at her self and what she was wearing "nothing" then she looked around where she was "an office!" "dammn what the hell have I done?" "hay Tyler wake up" sadie said stroking his nose! Tyler rolled over and saw sadie staring down at him "hey baby" Tyler said "WHAT THE FÚCK" shouted kaylee "shh shh shh" whispered matt "but I was in your room why are we right next to the fridge" she said confused "we didn't do anyTHING. Right?" "no no don't worry um we kissed snogged felt and that was it! Look your still in clothes" matt said "oh good lol" kaylee said. "mmmm I feel awful from yesterday " "go and freshen up in my shower now if you like and I call a cab for you so you can go back home" matt said "thanks matt I'll go do that" Kaylee ran up stairs to go and have a nice shower! "what happened last nite Jason?" "um well you got drunk tried to take off your bikini then kissed me back then danced on the table then nearly got rapped then nearly got me in a car crash then stole my car keys and well um..." Jason replied "oh god" Ella said Jason bent down and kissed her He then grabbed his jeans from the steering wheel and put them on then put on his shirt which was in the boot!!! Jason sat in the front seat and put in his car keys !!!! And started driving back Ella found Jason's jacket which was on the floor in the back. It was a little big for her but covered her up and kept her warm. They arrive in a car park and Jason picked her up and got on the lift 1,2,3,4,5,6.........,17 finely Jason got off the lift and opened his door into his apartment on the 17th floor ! His mum wasn't in because she had to finish off work at the bank. Jason laid ella on the yellow with pink flowered couch and went to his room to get a shower "ella the showers all yours now" Jason called Jason walked in. In some clean clothes "yer ok thank you Jason " Ella said Ella went into the bath room and took off her only piece of clothing ... Jason's jacket! Ella was in the lovely warm shower. "hey Ella can I just come in and grab my tooth-brush ?" Jason called Since there was a big shower curtain Ella said yes Jason opened the door and went to pick-up his tooth brush when "knock-knock Jason I'm back can I just get my make-up removers from in there since your just in the shower!!!" Jason saw the door handle open and Jason quickly jumped in the shower!! Ella turned round in surprise. She was about to scream but Jason but his hand over her mouth. Ella nodded and Jason took his hand offer her "so you just had a quite night inn last night Jason?" his mum called "um yer mum a quite night!" Jason said "ok Jason I'm gonna go to bed and get some sleep before I have to go back to work." she said. Ella and Jason heard the door slam and Ella pushed Jason outta the shower!!! Jason walked out After 15 mins Jason herd "Jason I don't have any clothes to change into" Ella called. "oh .... Um...... Ill get you something!" Jason grabbed her some clothes from his room A shirt A pair of jack wills trousers A hoodie "thanks" she called Jason snook Ella back to her house and ella promised to return the clothes asap! Hope u like the story xx