Okay, this is my first fanfic. So I'm new to this. I've read alot of fanfics before, and they are really good. So I decide to try. Well, hope you enjoy! ^^^^^^^^^^^^ Nicole POV I just found out that I was going to live with my dad. I should be happy, but I'm not. I keep thinking about earliar today. -FLASHBACK- I walked in home after a day of school. I found my mom at the oval-shaped, brown, wood dining table with a sad look on her face. Her brown eyes were confused, angry, and sad. I decided to start a converstaion. "Hi mom!" I exclaimed. She didn't look up. "Nicole, I have something to tell you. I'm not sure if you're going to like it, but it's for your own good." She looked up at me, and motioned me to sit down. I took the seat next to her. "You're father called. He wants you to live with him for a couple of months." She told me. I just stood there, wondering 'Why on earth would he finally contact us after what, 13 years?' I didn't hate my father, but I just don't like how he left us after I was about 2 years old. I have very faint memories about him. "Where does he live?" I wondered. "Pretty far. In America. But I promise, I'll always keep contact while you're there, okay?" My mom stated. I took a glance at my mom to see her watery eyes. I can tell she was holding back her tears. I couldn't see her like this anymore. I hugged her. "I'll miss you." I whispered softly. "I'll miss you more." She replied. We let go of each other. "When will I be leaving?" I asked, quietly. "Tomorrow afternoon." She answered. I nodded, and went upstairs to my room. -End of Flashback- So here I am, packing clothes. I realized how much I'll miss my mom. My parents seperated when I was two. I didn't know why. I asked my mother once, she told me that she'll tell me when I'm older. I just left it with that. My mom's name is Samantha. My dad's name is Matt. My mom has brown eyes that look like chocolate sometimes. Her hair is dark brown and wavy, it's at shoulder-length. I don't know how my dad looks like. I'm an only child. But, I've always wanted a brother. I finish packing and decided to go call some of my friends and tell them. I take my phone, and scroll down the list. I call my friend, Emily. She answers on the second ring. "Hello?" Emily says. "Emmy! It's me, Nicole." I reply. "Hi Nics, what's up?" "Nothing really, but my mom told me that I'll be living with my dad in America. I'll be staying with him for a couple of months." I tell her. "What?!?! Are you kidding me? You can't leave me! I'll be stuck with Adam! Even if it's just for a few months!" She started throwing questions at me. "Emily! Adam is not the bad. Plus, I know you have a major crush on him. It won't be that bad. You also have a lot of other friends." I answer her. "Well.." I can imagine her face smiling right now. "Just call me when you're at the airport, okay? Don't worry about calling Adam, and everyone else. I got it covered." "Thanks Em! Okay, I will. You're the best! Bye." I exclaim. "Bye Nics!" I end the call. I put my phone on top of the drawer, and I fall onto the bed. I drifted away into deep sleep. -I know, not so good- I'll continue later! Byeee
You already have some detail, but I think you should put more, like describe in depth what she's feeling. Good start!