The Boy Next Door

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Tiffeh_love (01), Jun 15, 2012.

  1. Tiffany was pretty,Medium length brown hair,carmel skin,light brown eyes,athletic and was very shy.She was a very great singer and played piano.Great with children.
    Tiffany's Pov
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    "Tiffany! Tiffany!" my mom called out "we finally got a new neighbor a boy your age with a little sister and parents!"
    "Amazing mom" I said in a unenthusiastic voice "why so glum sweetheart?" my mom asked "because we always get new neighbors then they end up moving again and I get too attached" I say with a sigh, my mom pats me on the back and goes back into the kitchen.
    I look out the window, a big truck followed by a car. A cute boy walks out "great" I say rolling my eyes my mom nags me to help them unpack.
    As I troll out my house with my hair in a bun wearing sweats,the boy looks at me and smiles,I smiles back as I get closer to where he is.

    I trip on a basketball Oof! Straight to the ground on my butt "ouch" he runs to me holding his hand out "are you okay he says trying to hold in a laugh"
    "Just fine" I say as I get up he's still holding my hand. I blush madly "sorry" he says blushing and moving his hand reluctantly as if he never wanted to let go " it okay what's your name" I smile "Jonathan" he says "what's yours?" he replies "Tiffany but you can call me tiff" I say shyly "nice so you came over too?" he says
    I was day dreaming whoa he was so cute..."Tiff? Tiff?" He says waving his hand over my face "s-s-sorry" I say
    Stuttering "I came to help you" I say embarrassedly
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    Jonathan dark brown hair, hazel eyes gorgeous smile, Tan skin,great sense of humor,
    Extremely athletic, six pack, All the girls like him
    Jonathan's Pov

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    My dad's job made us have to move all the way to California, I miss my old friends ugh I'm dreading this move.
    I finally arrive and it's like 3 hours there we finish quickly then this really pretty, I mean GORGEOUS girl walks out from the house next to mine she trips over a basketball. I help her up I just realise that I'm holding her hand a little bit too long she starts to blush "ugh she's so cute" I think.

    She came to help but we had already finished she invited me to come to her house. As we were walking in her house I saw like a bajilion of basketball trophies saying " Tiffany .A. Nieves" "Wow she must be good" I thought
    "you like them?" she says, which startled me "yea there cool I have some of my own too" I say bragging a little "cool" she says she lead me to her basement where we play a few games,watch a movies. Then her mom came in giving us M
     
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  3. Awesome keep going!
     
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  6. Wtf is it cuttin off nd I need new characters any1 wanna give me some?
     
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  8. Don't use the "and" sign. That is why it's cutting you off.
     
  9. M and M's and popcorn as I go to put
    My hand in the popcorn bowl her hand touches my hand. A tingly sensation thrives throughout my body
    She looks at me, I look into her beautiful light brown eyes


    And then............................



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    CLIFF HANGER 
    FEED BACK APPRECIATED WILL UPDATE LATER TONITE AND NEW CHARACTERS NEEDED ALSO!!!
     
  10. Eek I love it! Bumpdate!
     
  11. HAHAHA I TOLD YOU I'D BE BACK WITH MORE!!
    Tiffany's POV
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    As we're watching the movie I go to grab some popcorn then I felt his warm hands rub against mine,he looked up at me and could tell I was a tomato because he was smiling.

    As I looked into his crazy gorgeous hazel eyes he leaned in so did I and then.........



    The door opens its my dad with some soda " great " I think we move away quickly. When my dad leaves I put my hand on my lap then Jonathan slides his hand onto mine I blush
    He kisses me on the cheek "see you at school tomorrow tiff", I'm literally red as a freaking brick wall! I walk him to the door silently then I said "goodnight Jonathan" he pushed his hair back then waved and smiled.

    I shut my door, had my back against the door and smiled and said Jonathan over and over in my head

    2 weeks later btw she is a freshmen in high school and he is a junior she's 15 he's 16. They have become real good friends
    Jonathan's POV
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    Beep! Beep! Beep

    "ugh 7:00 already" I slap the alarm get up and take a shower. I wear a button up plaid blue shirt some jeans and black vans. Jell my hair and make it look messy just a little.
    *Bus arrives*
    I grab my bagel and kiss my mom on the cheek and walk me and my little sister to the bus. I sat her beside me
    "Jonatwan" "I excited fow skwool" she says " haha aww I'm gonna miss you all day jasmine but I'll be back to pick you up after school"
    We arrive at school I see tiffany and She says hi then starts to play with my sister "aww she's so cute" she says "haha thanks" we drop her off together and she asked me if I took the bus I said yes then she said " jonathan I can drive you well my sister can drive us" she tells me " oh okay thanks I have my own car but I can't drive it yet so my best friend drives me around in it"
    We go to all our classes
     
  12. FEED BACK APPRECIATED WILL UPDATE NEXT WEEK
     
  13. I think this story has a strong beginning and a potentially brilliant plot. 

    BUMPs!