striked by the bells

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *LilySnape (01), Dec 29, 2011.

  1. Okay so my other stories have utterly failed but I really want to know what you think so please give me feedback

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    "Damn alarm clock." I groaned and dragged myself out of bed. I checked myself in the mirror and brushed my teeth, whilst doing that there was sudden movement from behind me. I screamed as someone wrapped their arms around me, sending toothpaste all over the mirror.
    "Shh, you'll wake the neighbours." A voice chuckled in my ear. I knew that voice. I whizzed around and smacked his shoulder.
    "Rhyan you blithering idiot!" I all but yelled at him. "What are you playing at?!"
    Rhyan said nothing and stood there with a amused look on his face. I frowned at him.
    "Aw, your cute when your mad." He smiled.
    "Yeah well I'm about to get bloody adorable!"
    "You already are." He smiled causing me to calm down and blush. He laughed. "Anyway Lily I need you to be at the resturant tonight."
    I scowled.
    "What resturant?!"
    "Ah, you will see..."

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  2. Thanks pie 
     
  3. Should be 'Struck by the bells' but I like it  it's good!
     
  4. Lol I know I realised that after I posted it 
     
  5. Hehe I'll update If I get three more bumps 
     
  6. Bump,bump,and bump
     
  7. Okay I'll update after my lunch 
     
  8. I love it Lily!!
     
  9.  Thanks! Update time!
     
  10. After Rhyan left I quickly grabbed my mobile and dialed Sammies number.
    "Hello?" Answered Sammie. I smiled knowing she probably knows what he's going to do her being his sister and all.
    "Hi Sam it's Lily! I was wondering if you know which resturant I'm going to? Rhyan never told me." Sammie hesistated. I bit my lip hoping she'll tell me.
    "Sorry Lils I don't know."
    "Oh... Okay see you later Sam." I hung up. Dammit why was Rhyan always one step ahead? I decided to grab some breakfast, as in a coffee, so I stopped by starbucks. As I walked out of Starbucks something happened that would change my life forever.

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  11. OMG!!











    BUMP!!










    U GOT BUMPED BY BATMAN!!!!










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  13. OMG RHYAN IS MY BROTHER LOL, BUMP BTW