Life or Death

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Syoka, Oct 13, 2012.

  1. Ok PLZ comment suggest anything!!!!!
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    I pull my hand into a fist and my squad hualts I pointing my eyes then forward then we stealthy walk into enemy ground. Then I hear Bam! Then I see one off my men go down I yell "Ambush!!!!" then my guys start firing at the Enemy rushing in I nail one in the head one in the nuts another in the heart. We shoot then out ammo runs out. "Fall back!"

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    Rough draft!
     
  2. Really cool!!