Fatal Attraction

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xX-Elle-Xx (01), Dec 10, 2011.

  1. I looked down on her pleading eyes, that only weeks ago, were filled with love and lust. She pleaded once more..
    "Please? I love you Jake.. We can stay together..Please?" She begged her final words.

    I held her up by her long, red hair, and stared delibrately into her green eyes..

    "Im sorry Lucy.. Love is never enough." I whispered into her ears, as I slid the blade deep into her stomach and let her pitiful body fall to the ground, as she screamed and choked.

    I could only laugh as she writhed, in deadly pain, before my eyes.

    Should I Continue?
     
  2. Yes
    Bump.

    Read my story called The Perfect Two. It's my first one and I really need to know how it is.:)
     
  3. This reminds me of my story a lot hunting dawn! So yes I would love to see more 
     
  4. AweI LOVE HUNTING DAWN You need to update And yes Ill read the perfect two
     
  5. I kneeled down and inhaled the sweet scent of death, as I began to inhale the life draining from her. The taste was extravagant, and my lungs burned as one more life entered my breath.

    (Jake Foster is what many call a Hijou, otherwise known as a Soul Sucker. It's an ancient Japanese Myth that these creatures hide in the cover of night, seducing thier prey, and devouring their soul. And that, was exactly Jake Fosters intention.)
     
  6. Bump!  I approve 
     
  7. Thank you guys Please if youd like to be a character, post it on here
     
  8. Great story! 
     
  9. I walked the streets back to my coven, located in a small abandoned house. The delicious scent of passing souls lingered everywhere. My senses were spiralling and I was still hungry.

    The wind then picked up, and I caught a small scent of the most intoxicating aroma I'd ever encountered.
     
  10. Could u make me a character I really like the fan fiction u write truly
     
  11. Yes tell me name age gender personality and anything else you like!!!
     
  12. I wanna be in ur story!
    I'm a girl (obviously lol)
    My name is Vanessa Creek
    I'm caring,loving, daring and I don't take any BS from anyone
    I'm 5'5 honey brown eyes black wavy hair and skinny and I love dancing
     
  13. James Cobalt
    Age 17
    6'3 brown hair blue eyes
     
  14. Mostly a loner but when I have to I'm nice and work as a good leader
     
  15. Awesome guys.  i love it! Okay so who wants to be a Hijuo
     
  16. This is really interesting though how u based it off history