Story Contest

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SophiaBennett (01), May 22, 2012.

  1.  Hello everyone, there is going to be a story contest on this page.

    Rules
    1) You must not steal another person's story
    2) Stories must not be already created
    3) DO NOT post on here advertising something you have created already
    4) All stories must not be any longer than two pages
    5) Any type of story is welcome
    6) Your story will be judged on grammar, content, and punctuation
    7) ALL ENTRIES MUST BE SUBMITTED BEFORE SATURDAY 26TH MAY
    8) Enjoy!
     
  2. Do i post it here or make a thread?
     
  3. Might submitt one
     
  4. A theme?

    We all need a theme.

    And do you mean oneshot? Because I'll need approximately one year, a hundred days, sixty nine hours, ninety six minutes and a hundred and two seconds to write a complete novel. :3
     
  5. I can still join?  cause of the, you know, other contest? I mean, it's okay if I can't anymore. 
     
  6. NOTE FROM JUDGE:
    Post your stories here
    They can be a maximum of two pages
    Write about whatever you want :)
     
  7. Oh and Andi, yeah, you can still join 
     
  8. Wait max or min of two pages
     
  9. I'm gonna enter :3
     
  10. -'Cause I Love Her-
    An original by me... 

    A month ago:

    -Angelica's POV-
    The skies are crying, I am watching, catching teardrops from the sky. Only silence as it it's ending, but we never had a chance...

    I wish I could be strong like Demi. I sang that song inside my head over and over again.

    I was just in my room. Thinking about Jay. I wanted to hold hi everyday. To be with him until my last dying breath. But he doesn't know about my sickness.

    Ring ring ring ring

    I picked my phone up.
    "Hello, Jay?" I smiled happily.

    "Angelica, look out you window." He said and he hanged up.

    I went to my window and saw him looking up, he was smiling like a baby and said, "ANGELICA, WILL YOU GO TO PROM WITH ME?" He brought balloons and chocolates and a bouquet of blue roses.

    Blue roses... That must've cost a lot!

    My mum heard all the commotions and blushed when she saw him in that stance. He was the sweetest guy ever. He always surprised me with a lot of things. She let him in and in to my room.

    "Angelica... So will you go to prom with me? I don't care if it's just as friends. Come to prom. With me." When he flashes that smile, it makes me want to hug him so tight and so I act as what my heart told me... And ran to him and hugged him. He dropped the things he brought and twirled me around the air.

    "Is this a yes?" He said cheerfully.

    "Yeah." I whispered into his ears as tears came down. I looked at him in the eyes and kissed him gently on the lips.

    I love him... That I can't control my feelings anymore. He was my first love, my first kiss, everything was first around him.

    Prom was tomorrow night, and I was ready. I was feeling heavy burdens in my body. But I thought of positivities. I had to live a positive life. I just had to. Until my last moment.

    Prom:

    "I'll be fine, mum. You don't have to worry." I whispered into her ears as we went down the stairs.

    She just nodded and gave me a kiss on my cheek.


    I went down as I saw him. He was wearing a tux. And it looked really good on him. I was wearing a simple black and white dress. It was up to the knee, and my hair was in curls.

    He looked at me for about a minute until I snapped a finger near his ear. He was startled and we laughed. I looked more pale that time. But I just smiled and hope this day would be fine. We took pictures before we could go to the dance.

    

    The last night with him.
    I knew it was gonna be the end.
    I can't go the stage anymore and say my valedictorian speech. My time will be up. I just feel it.

    There we were, taking pictures with everyone. It was the perfect night.

    And the prom king and queen were announced.

    "And the prom king is... Jay Collins!" Everyone was clapping.

    "If there's a king, there's a queen... And the queen is!!! Angelica Schmidt!" I was surprised. It was me... They really said my name.

    We took our dance and we were dancing all night. It felt so silent when I was with him. And then he let go of me, and got a box from his pocket...

    "Angelica, I promise to love you, now and forever. Will you accept this promise ring?" He asked me as he stared into my eyes. I just nodded because I was speechless.

    All eyes were on us and someone took pictures. I was so happy that I cried out of joy. After he inserted the ring on my finger, I hugged him so tight and danced to the music again.

    "I love you..." I said and pulled off. I closed my eyes and kissed him gently and softly. I opened my eyes and he was staring at me.

    "I love you more Angelica..." He kissed me back again.

    And the whole night was the best. He took me home and kissed me again under the moonlight.

    The moon was the evidence of our undying love.

    That night I replayed all the memories. I cried and laughed. I wrote a letter to him before my time would die, saying...

    I love you... And I'm thankful for your love. I'm sorry if I didn't tell you. But Jay you are the best thing that has ever happened in my life. Forever loved, Angelica.

    I suffered the pain last night all by myself. I was crying and then my family noticed when I was screaming already. They took me to the hospital as quick as they can. But they lost me half way through. As the last teardrop fell, I was thinking of how much I was thankful to God and how much I am lucky to have my family and Jay... 

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    And this was a story about the girl I have loved ever since I met her. She was Angelica Schimdt, she had a soft long brunette hair, light blue eyes, and she was sick, but no one knew except herself and her family. When she was 18, I began to notice her changes. She was getting thinner that I thought she was having anorexia, she was really pale, but she said she was fine. I didn't mind it so until she vomited blood, her family told me she was just sick of depression and something else.

    "It isn't that serious, Jay." They'd say all the time. But she actually had a heart problem together with Leukaemia.

    And right, I have to introduce myself. I'm Jay Collins, dirty blonde hair with light brown eyes, people would say I was hot and handsome. I'm a soccer player and I am in love with Angelica. I am a month older than her.

    I've been courting her for three years already. But she always said that she wasn't ready. I was very committed to her. I never tried to have any other relationship or look at other girls. She was the only one who could ever make me feel this way.

    And this is what happened before I lost her...

    And since I promised to love her forever. I will keep it.
     
  11. Ohmygad. So many typo :(
     
  12. lol this is such a fail. I'm not good with short stories.
     
  13. Wait, is this for you to get your own story?  if you are, that's weird.
     
  14. Hmm here's one off the top of my head.

    Darkness is friendly. Darkness is warm and soulless just like I thought it would be. It looks upon me like a mother would a child, it smiles at me, a smile so ghastly my eyes tear up at it's beauty. It has no gender, it contains hate unimaginable and indescribable. I hug Darkness as I fade. Fading so quickly. Darkness brushes my lips—

    Light. Terrible, blinding light. My purring Darkness is replaced by a blinding light.
    "NOOOO!" I sob, my throat raw from the screaming that I was not aware of uttering. My cooing Darkness whimpers as light lashes across it. Light, you are cruel master. The light pours in and heals the dripping cuts flowing with crimson that Darkness had lovingly created.
    "NOOO! LUCIFER!" the beautiful crimson on my chapped lips stops flowing. As Darkness grows smaller and Light triumphs, I sob in it's arms, trying to escape, to be with my Darkness. Light won't let go. The love smothers me, it's so hard to breathe.
    "REMMY! REMMY PLEASE WAKE UP, PLEASE!" the voice, the voice is Light itself.
    "NOOOO!" My name is not Remmy. No, no, no, I'm Hell, my name is Hell and the Light burns. It burns as it lovingly heals my wounds and whispers by sweetly. The inside of my mouth is bursting with delicious flavors. No...it's so terrible.
    "Remmy...please..."
    Light pulls me through.

    "Francis?" I mutter, his gorgeous blue eyes hurt to look into, so I stare at his neck.
    "Oh God Remmy...Remmy..." he whimpers as he holds me, his terribly warm and comfortable body.
    "...Remmy don't do that ever again, please?"
    "What'd I do?" I ask, bewildered.
    "You...I found you in the bathroom throwing up pills...I thought...I thought you were dead..." tears slide off his golden lashes. I instinctively reach up and wipe them.

    "Remmy...don't ever leave me...please." he whispers, tucking my hair behind my ear. I listen as the sirens in my ears become louder. He called 911. I realize I'm sobbing. And I realize too late that I lost Darkness. My heart aches. Darkness...Darkness I loved you. But as Francis kisses my forehead, my gay best friend, it hurts more, because I know he'll never love me...he'll never love me because I'm not a boy. Darkness will loathe me...Darkness will loathe me and I will miss it so much. But don't worry, I'll see you again Darkness, soon, very soon.
     
  15. Oh dear that was magnificent, better than mine (comment up) 
     
  16. I've got one but I have to have some time to write it. I will mention only two characters-
    Diamond and her sister Star Moonlight .
     
  17. I'll submitt mine later today
     
  18. Oohhhh I think I might have seen a winning story!!!! (I'm the judge btw)