Forbidden Dance

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Karina-The-One-And-Only, Oct 14, 2011.

  1. Forbidden Dance
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    The crowd cheered. They clapped. But all I focused on was on my dance. All I heard was my heart beat. I made that one move that made everyone gasp. Everyone stopped what they were doing. I had made the first move to the Forbidden Dance. Then I made the second and third. Before I made the next move,I twisted my ankle. In a result I'm in crutches. That was a year ago. Now I am unbeatable. I am unstoppable. No one can stop me from dancing the Forbidden dance. I will try it again the day it was created. To make history. During the day today,contests were going on to see who can dance better. I stepped outside my mansion I bought with the money I won in dance battles. I walked to the main hot spot for dancing. The Elementary school playground. As I walked I made girls faint. I was greeted by everyone I passed. I got money. I was popular and at the time that's all that I cared about. As I walked to the school I was joined by my two best guy friends. Manny and John. I knew them since I was just a little pipsqueak. I have arrived at the hot spot. Everyone cheers. I put on my shades and start dancing.
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    By the way I am a guy for this story.lol yes it had to be done.
    ~Her Own Helper,Aziza2~
     
  2. Bb coding fail 
    Meant to say


    Forbidden Dance
     
  3. Can I sign up? 
     
  4. So no one likes this story. I made an epic trailer for it though 
     
  5. I LOVE IT. CoNtInUe SoOn.

    Don't forget to check out my new story Attempt love, attempt suicide
     
  6. Please don't advertise other stories on here
    And I will check out you story but no more advertises please then readers won't focus on my hard work (Like yours)
    ~Her Own Helper,Aziza2~
     
  7. Sorry. -makes note- from an app where that's allowed:(
     
  8. Its ok
    I'll update now
    ~Her Own Helper,Aziza2~
     
  9. I arrive at my High School. School had just begun and I'm a senior now. There are old students and new students. As I walk in with Manny John we go to talk to the Senior girls. There were sections that said Seniors,Sophomores,Juniors and Freshman,so I knew that these girls were Seniors. I completed my flirting and walked over to talk with the guys.
    "Hey Jonathon! Dude I haven't seen you in like forever! Did you check out the girls this year they look hotter than last year!" Matt said. Matt was another one of my friends.
    "Yea dude! I can't wait to get in bed with every one of them! Ha! Just kidding dude I'm just looking for the right girl this year"I said.
    "Cool man me too! So how was your dancing in summer?"He asked. I smirked.
    "Perfect bro,well I got to go to get everything set this year,peace man" I said. I left Manny and John behind and went to my locker. I got my schedule that was in my locker. Then a girl came by me to open her locker. Guess I know one of my locker buddies. I looked at this girl closely and I could tell that she was new. I closed my locker and introduced my self.
    "Hi! I'm Jonathon! What's your name?"I asked.
    "Hi Jonathon and my name is Karina"She replied.
    "So can I see your schedule?"I asked.
    "Sure well it looks like we have every class together except for one,last period but I will see you at the end of the day"She said.
    "Cool,so I guess we should sit together to get to know each other more Karina"I said.
    "Ok well let's go to English"She said.
    I walked in and Manny and John weren't there. I guess we don't have first period together. I sat next to Karina and learned a lot more about her. What really interested me more was that she loved to dance. I invited her to one of my competitions at the end of the day. After school I walked her to my battle. I told her to sit and enjoy the battle. I danced. I spinned,and flipped. I made the crowd cheer. In a result I won.
    "So did you like my dancing Karina?"I asked.
    "Well,its very cute but I bet I can do better" She said. We battled next when everyone left. She made her move and so did I. We ended up getting closer to each other. At the last move of our dances we stared at each other,breathing heavily.
    "That was pretty good,you win"I said.
    "Well you were good too"She replied.
    "So want to go on a picnic with me Karina?"I asked.
    "Sure,it's a date"Karina said and left. As soon as she was out of site I fell to the ground.
    "Woah,I'm in love"I said to myself. The smell of her stayed on me.
     
  10. Love It love it love it
     
  11. Marrying it. I swear I will!
     
  12. I texted Karina to meet me in the park. I saw her coming and I stood up. I held her hand and I felt love already. We sat down and took the food out and started to talk for a while.
    "This is delicious Jonathon! I am having a great time!"She said.
    "I know! And your beautiful!"I said. She blushed.
    "Thanks Jonathon"Karina replied. We sat closer to each other. I leaned in to her a kissed her. It was a long kiss. It was soft and gentle. It was a passionate kiss I felt sparks. When we released she kissed me again.
    "I love you Karina,You're just what I have been looking for all my life"I said. She smiled. We cleaned up and headed over to my mansion. My parents had their side of the mansion and I had mine so we went to my side. We went into my room to see a movie. I had to change my clothes to get comfortable. I took off my shirt revealing my muscular body. Karina stared.
    "You like?"I said smirking.
    "Yea you look cute with those muscles!"She said. I walled over to her pushed her down on the bed with my body. I started to kiss her And got on top of her but she quickly stopped.
    "What's wrong babe?"I asked.
    "I'm not ready for that Jonathon sorry but maybe I should go"She said.
    "No stay here! Please? I love you and we won't do anything that makes you uncomfortable,I promise"I begged.
    She started to kiss me again. I put my hands on her waist. We walked over to see the movie as we planned. We soon fell asleep together on the bed we didn't have you know what. We just slept in each other's arms it was romantic.
     
  13. The next morning I woke up and prepared breakfast for us. I finished cooking and woke up Karina with a kiss.
    "Good morning baby"I whispered. She jumped onto me and I carried her to the kitchen. I set her down. She walked to the living room and put some music on. She started to dance. I went over and danced with her. I put my hands on her waist and kissed her. I made a move that almost twisted my ankle again. At the end of the song I ended by bringing her down with my arms and kissing her. We smiled and held each other's hands. We ate breakfast and got into my car. We picked up Manny And John.
    "Sup Jonathon who's this chick?"Manny asked.
    "This chick Manny,is my girlfriend and her name is Karina she is new to school and she dances just like me!"I said.
    "Sweet so Karina got any lady friends?"John asked. Karina laughed.
    "Don't worry I'll set you up with some of my friends today I promise! You too Manny If you want?"Karina said.
    "Actually I got my own way of getting a girl today Karina! I bet I'll get her to be my girl by tomorrow."Manny said. I parked my car at the school.
    "Alrighf then Manny"She said. I got out of the car and took Karina's hand. We held each other's hand and walked inside together to our lockers. We kissed when a teacher wasn't looking on every period. Mani love this girl she went through my mind every second of the day.
     
  14. 
     
  15. -Takes a bow- Thank You Thank you! 
     
  16. I danced by myself practicing some moves.
    "Oh man!"I said. I fell. I stood up an stopped the music. I turned around and Karina kissed me. I kissed back.
    "Hey babe"I said grabbing a water bottle.
    "Hey so what do you want to do tonight?"She asked.
    "I don't know how about we watch the moon at the pond tonight?"I suggested.
    "Sounds great I'll meet you there babe"She said. I kissed her and Abe kissed me. I put my hands on her waist and she moves her body we were dancing as If you would at a wedding. The way she moved her body I felt love. We made out and she left.
     
  17. Epicnessssssss. 