Story Line: ______________________________ It was a Saturday morning. I woke up to find myself in a shack alone in the dark.
When I stood up I could feel someone breathing on my neck. My first reaction was to run, but I wanted to see who or what it was so I turned around and punched it in the face.
What ever it was stumbled back wards it looked like a guy but I wasn't sure so I awkwardly stood where I was.
Tristan's Pov __________ He falls to the floor. "Geese calm urself Fran!" He feels his nose in Pain. "Just tryin to scar u, no harm intended." ___________________________ Fran's Pov ________ She looks at him confused. "Tristan? Y the hell am I here?" Fran looks around the area. _____________________________ Tristan's Pov __________ "I don't know but Ur not the only one Bella, Mar, and Zach are here too." _____________________________
Bella, Mar, and Zach's Pov ______________________ The three of them awkwardly step out of the shadows frantically looking around. Bella is the first one to speak, "Uh... Hi Fran..." ____________________________ Fran's Pov _________ Fran looks at Bella, "Uh... hi" _____________________________ Everyone's Pov ____________ Everyone look's at eachother awkwardly. A loud screeching noise comes on and we all fall to the ground covering our ears.
You don't have to switch point of views every time other people are doing things. Calm down. Also, tens of tiny posts aren't exactly attractive.
Voices' Pov __________ Someone starts speaking, "Hello children, Glad you all know each other. I'm proud to be able to use u in my little game." The voice laughs evilly. "Now let me explain the rules to you. 1. Try to escape well u can't 2. Don't try to kill Ur self u'll just bring more misery to each others lives 3. Stay Alive And finally 4. Have fun. The voice starts laughing again. "Just to be clear only one of you will come out." The loud screeching sound come back on for at least 5 more seconds than shuts off. _____________________________ Everyone's Pov ____________ Bella and Mar start crying. Zach sits on the floor trying to hold back tears. Tristan sits on the floor showing no emotion and Fran stands there watching everyone. ______________________________
Tristan's Pov __________ Tristan looks down at the floor and sees gas coming through it. He quickly taps Zach. He looks up, "What?" Than he notices and taps Fran. Fran looks at Zach confused than sees the gas. Tristan looks franticly looks around than finds Bella and Mar. He covers his ears while they start screaming. Thinks, -Why'd this have to be chosen all they're gonna do is scream.- _____________________________ Fran's Pov ________ She looks around for an air vent or something that could be broken to get out of the room they are in. She pushes Zach out of the way, "Zach move, now!" Fran finds a metal pole breaks the roof with it and climbs out of the opening to find herself in another room. She mumbles: "Wow he wasn't kidding when he said we couldn't get out..."
Zach's Pov _________ After Fran broke the ceiling I realized what she was doing so decided to be sensible and climb up after her. "Yo, Tristan, Bella, Mar, come on" I wave over to all of them. ______________________________ Tristan and Mar's Pov __________________ We both looked over to Zach and Fran than at each other and nodded. At the same time we ran to the opening Fran had made and climbed out. ______________________________ Everyone's Pov _____________ We all looked down at poor Bella. We all watched her fall to the floor. We all watched her as the floor broke from under her as she fell into the hole. We were all too afraid to cry and too nervous to say anything to each other.
Story Line: _________ Nervous everyone falls a sleep figuring they'll need rest for tomorrow. (The Next Day) Zach wakes up and just sits on the roof top thinking about what happened yesterday. Five minutes later Fran wakes up they both look at each other but don't say a word. In the distance they hear someone screaming. The scream wakes everyone else up. They all look around to see where it's coming from.
Everyone's Pov _____________ Mar is the first to notice, "OMG!! Look!" She points to the right of Tristan. We all see a girl running strait at us with a sword. Fran mumbles, "Great she's got a weapon.." Tristan stares at the girl thinking -Why do I feel like I've seen her before??- He blurts out, "It's Bella!" We all look at him. Zach says, "What?" Tristan looks at him, "That girl is Bella! That gas wasn't meant to kill anyone just knock them out so they could be worked on to turn against us!" We all stare at Tristan than look at Bella.
BELLA IS EVIL it's funny how everyone in the club has exactly the same/similar storylines, while my story Is completely different to anyone else's
Tristan's Pov ___________ I watch Bella run straight towards us and realizes no one is going to stop her. When I turn to everyone their faces are shocked. I realize what I have to do. "Fran, get me that pole you used to brake the roof." She looks at me, then tentatively reaches down and grabs the pole. I take it from her. "You guys wait here." I jump off the roof and run straight at Bella. With out looking back I can tell everyone is either scared or confused. When I get close enough to Bella I used the pole and fling the sword out of her hand and into the air. When I look into Bella's eyes I can tell she looks really pissed. I think -It's sad to know that our friend has been taken away from us. Changed from someone kind and fun to be with to someone evil- I jump up and catch the sword than stab Bella in the heart. Quietly I whisper, "Bella I'm sorry. You couldn't stay alive. It wouldn't be safe for everyone else. If only it didn't have to end this way..." I turn away from Bella and walk back to everyone else. Without looking up I can tell Mar is crying. When I get there I see Zach comforting her and Fran standing on a corner of the roof away from them.