The Untitled Story Of Brandon Anders

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -AC-TheAlphaWolf-, May 11, 2012.

  1. Don't we all have that one person we'll never stop having feelings for.It could be your first crush,your ex-girlfriend/boyfriend or maybe that one boy/girl you met that one time
    Fact is we all have one and how much ever they push us away we'll always still love them.They might be involved with someone else or maybe your with someone else.
    I know mine.Ashlyn Jacobs.The one girl in front of whom i'm a total drooling puppy.
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    Should I continue?!
    Any comments/suggestions?!
     
  2. Thanks man
    4 more bumps and i'll update
     
  3. Okay read my story
    StarCrossed lovers
     
  4. A reminder.


    One space after a punctuation mark.

    E.g:

    "I like pie. I like unicorns, too."

    Not:

    "I like pie.I like unicorns,too."
     
  5. You could also add a few commas into the story. It's good so far.