Hey it's my first story so please no hate! It's all in Katniss's POV ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I wake up and look around the room. Prim is snuggled up with ButterCup who is wide awake and my mother is still sleeping. I couldn't sleep because it's reaping day today. Almost no one can sleep on reaping day, everyone is too nervous. I'm extra nervous today because Prim is now 12, old enough to be reaped. Her name is only in there once. I refused to let her take treasse. I get up pull on my trousers, my hunting boots and my hunting jacket. I look in the press and sure enough I find the goats cheese Prim left me. -------------------------------------------- The story may not match the book! Thank you for reading!
...why do a story like this when it's already written in a book? It's unoriginal if you are just going to copy the story and just change parts of it. Other people have done hunger games stories, but they have done it differently. One of them did the actual games, but with different people. She incorporated the different viewpoints for many of the characters and described their emotions perfectly. (I think this one was called The Death Games.) Another hunger games based story was one I liked very much. It was the hunger games, but instead of katniss volunteering, primrose did not let her and went on to become a tribute. This one was extremely detailed and was a brilliant story. So if you are going to write a story based on The hunger games, make it original! I'm not trying to hate, and for your first story it looks quite good, but people won't read something that has already been written.