Flame

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by iDontLikePeople2, Oct 4, 2013.

  1. Hello, my beauties! So, this is it! The second instalment of The Fire Trilogy!Yes, I promise to do longer updates this time. This one will include different points of view, as well!So, enjoy!

    Other Titles by Brooke


    Flame

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    I fiddle with the necklace that lies on my chest. It's the shape of a spark, and that fits my situation. It was given to me by my best friend and first love: Carl York. I now where it wherever I go, and refuse to remove it from my neck.

    The bell rings and I get up, the burn on my leg stinging. I grab my books, and pull out my map. My next lesson is History, and I have no idea where that is. I scan the map for a while, looking for a blue box with 'H8', my classroom, written inside it. I can't find it. H1, H2, H3, H4. That's it. No H8. I sigh and fold up my map.

    I trudge out of the classroom and into the crowded hallway. People stare at me, and I pull my beanie lower. My ginger hair is glowing; something that happens often nowadays, as I'm always angry.

    I wander aimlessly for a few minutes, until I decide that I won't find H8 on my own. I resolve to go to Student Reception, and ask them to check my timetable on the computer. It's on the other side of the school, but I may as well.

    I turn right down the science corridor, and walk up it until the end, then turn left to go down the PSHCE corridor. It takes me a while, but eventually I get to Student Reception. I walk through the door and immediately notice the fat, toad-like lady sitting at the desk. She has dyed-blond hair and is wearing heaps of make-up. I do my best not to laugh.

    "Student Reception," she says, without glancing up from her crossword.

    "Um... I don't know how to get to H8..." I say, nervously.

    At this, she looks up.

    "H8? I aint never heard such a thing! Hand me your timetable."

    I do as she says.

    She looks at it, and shakes her head.

    "You want H3, love." She concludes.

    I take back my timetable and look at it. I notice now that the left half of the eight is drawn on in blue pen. I sigh.

    "Hey," says the woman. "Don't let them get you down,"

    "Thanks," I whisper, and walk off.

    It takes me barely any time at all to get to my class, but I'm the last in. I take a seat at the back, and get out my book.

    "Turn to page 394," says the teacher, Miss Parkinson.

    I turn the pages of the book slowly.

    I look up and notice a boy staring at me. He looks confused, but turns around after he sees I'm looking at him. What a creep.

    I look at the title on page three-hundred-and-ninety-four. 'The Gun Powder Plot'. What?! We did this about three years ago! I roll my eyes. I hate coming to a new school. I should use my old essays, or would that be considered cheating? Maybe. I don't know.

    But, what I do know is, us Flipsides splitting up was the best decision I ever made! They practically ruined my life! I'm glad that's over...

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    So, this is the first update! Please, tell me what you guys think!I love hearing from you all!
     

  2. Yay
    Yay
    Yay
    ?Yay?
    Yay
    Amazing
    I don't care I love it
     
  3. Looooooove it I'm still upset about Carl though
     
  4. You should be upset. I was upset writing it!
     
  5. Exactly u meanie?
     
  6. Wait I just reread that THEY SPLIT UP ?! FIRST Carl now this u meanie
     
  7. You're just not even a person anymore you're a cruel cruel mushroom
     
  8. Mushrooms disgust me!
     
  9. Me too. Which is why you're a mushroom. Kidding.
     
  10. ?Sammi is being mean...BLIMEY! Don't get your knickers in a twist!
     
  11.  IN AMERICA WE SAY PANTIES!
     
  12. (In American Accent)

    Gosh, maaaan. What you gotta be so uptight?
     
  13. That's, like, Southern California or Hawaii. DO ANOTHER :twisted:
     
  14. (In Russian Accent)

    Heylow, Sputnik. I haf come for de whisky.
     
  15. 
    ~French accent~

    'ello, zee 'amburgaires are een zee freezaire.
     
  16. (In An Australian Accent)

    1: G'Day Bruce!

    2: G'Day Shelia! Mind puttin' another shrimp on the barbie!

    1: Sure thang. Blimey, it's a scorcher today, in'it?
     
  17.  (In one of those old southern accents)

    Mama, why we gotta hitch up Brownie? That ole thing can't even carry a flea! She sure as hell ain't gonna be towin' Miz Betty around!
     
  18. I walked in another Demension of different people with accents 