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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HEXIN, Jul 25, 2011.

  1. So this is a small story I made-up. Don't worry, it won't interfere with my original story I'm doing!

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    What he did... 

    Alex was sitting down on his chair in class. Everyone hated him, only his parents LIKED him. Josh, The class bully threw a scrunched up paper at Alex.

    " Hey Dweeb.....!" Josh said, getting up, pushing Alex and getting the paper ball

    " Leave me alo-

    Alex was interrupted by Josh. He pushed him over his chair, bringing the table with him. Everyone laughed. They all shouted,

    " SHE FELL OVER! SHE FELL OVER!" Alex was guy for your information.

    He got up and ran outside, skipping school. A few teenagers from south L.A met up with him.

    " Hey dork face.." one of them said, pushing Alex.

    Alex tried to run but one of them punched him in the stomach.

    " OOF!" Alex cried

    " Let him go..for now, we'll take care of YOU! tomorrow." the leader said

    Alex had enough of this. He went home and got his rope under his bed. He was hoping he would use it someday and today was it. He got up on the chair, tied a knot on his big circular light bulb and tied the other end around his neck.

    " Goodbye......cruel world.." he shouted, he started crying and stopped...

    He had done. He regretted it and tried to escape, but couldn't he saw a blur of his room..and it was getting darker....and darker....then it was nothing..

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  2. Rlly depressing buy good
     
  3. O and first!!!
     
  4. Lol thanks
     
  5. S'pose to have that effect!
     
  6. It needs more build up and details but good plot and idea
     
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