Untold Stories 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by F_FoR_FiRe, Jun 2, 2011.

  1. The Truth Behind You

    It's was a Cold summer Night , when Nate ,Rachel and Kayla decided To take a walk around The neighborhood. As They Walked Rachel Noticed that there was a Shadow Following them ,so she started talking ."Hey Guys Remember The movie we watch " Rachel said, Her two friends Stopped And Asked What Movie?Rachel Immediately Changed The Subject and started Walking faster.She turned around and saw that the shadow was gone. Rachel was So happy But her friends Couldn't move. Rachel said "Guys let's home " ,but her
    Friends Didn't seen to be listening.Rachel was very frightened ,As Rachel took her phone out her pocket a shadow appears in front of her And Picks Her up . As she sores Through The night sky ,she notices that the shadow wasn't a s shadow it was her future.


    Characters:Rachel-Able To Create Shadow And Turn Into A shadow

    Nate-Extremely Good Fighter

    Kayla-Key To the Powers
     
  2. So What do u guys Think 
     
  3. I'm Nate. A little confusing. Some grammar errors but I get what point you're trying to get across.
     
  4. Yea I Wrote While Listing to A podcast on Aztecs And yes u are Nate
     
  5. I will Write Mine Next Story And Danzo can u plz edit it for me

    By:Spikey
    Edited by:Danzo


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