Little Secrets

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by SinOrSaint, Oct 22, 2013.

  1. This is a poem made by a friend of mine. His really talented ad awesome. And going with the theme of secrets. Yes i do love him. But alas it is one-sided. I just wanted to share this to all of you and enjoy.

    This is a tribute to hated memories.

    For fake lovers and imaginary enemies.

    Of words and choices that I loved to hate.

    Whom I blame and thank for my current state.

    I never thought I turn out to be such a liar.

    Now looking back on it I see my troubles and
    the flaws they would inspire.

    I lied for attention, peace of mind and protection.

    The occasional transgression for the mostly pure intention.

    I’ve always wanted to be one of the good guys
    And I’ve done work to be one it would seem.

    But deep down I always believed in the ends justifying the means.

    I deceived in the face of trust.
    without remorse or pity.

    Loved in the name of lust
    and stayed in the name of apathy.

    I festered in anger
    and fueled other’s fire.

    Walking along side saints
    as a talented liar.

    On the outside though, it don’t seem like it

    all these years it was just learning to stay quiet.

    It doesn’t take much to notice
    look hard enough and you’ll see it.

    You see,
    The devil never left me…
    he’s just my little secret.

    Part of me would wonder
    why I choose to remember all this.

    Just skeletons in closets
    just being human
    why give it emphasis?

    Maybe it’s just a guilty conscience
    that’s been on my back for too long.

    And in writing this I hope it dies with it’s song.

    I’ve spent my time so far as a violent thinker.

    Helping with one hand and choking with the other.

    But thing’s ain’t that bad
    just figuring things out I swear this.

    This whole mess might be the consequence of self awareness.

    So here’s hoping that lost hope be mended.

    Or at least an ending that’s not open ended.

    I write this down and hope it dies with it.

    The devil hasn’t left me
    It’s just a little secret.
     
  2. I bet you made it just scared of what peiple will say  and its good
     
  3. Nope. It's his. I could send the link of his deviant art where this is posted. Aswell as i'm more in song writing. And i can't come up with something this good.
     
  4. Very well written, not going to rant ️
     
  5.  Superb 
     
  6. Wow this is amazing
     
  7. Daaaaammmmnnn that's all I can say. Its deep and I felt what he was feeling while I was reading this. That's really good.does he do spoken word or poetry cornors?
     
  8. I loved it thumbs up nd finger clicks
     
  9. Shame you won't get copyright striked
     
  10. Wow he's very talented!
    Deep and nice. Bump ️